Without a Sound...

[ellie101]

“Without a Sound”

By Ellie

A/N) I don’t own the Labyrinth. Was randomly productive a couple of days ago, finished typing this out earlier and am now posting despite (I’m sure) various errors I’ll beat myself over the head with later. Rough and unruly but here it is!

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“I don’t want to leave you,” she whispered the

Comments

[alorindanya]

DAMN I don't want it to leave there. WOW this story is incredible. Is there ever going to be a continuation or is this a one shot?

My heart was pounding for her when she was with him and for him for her to remember. WOW.

The only thing is we don't really know how many years after the Labyrinth this was, mostly becasue we don't know how old Toby is when he is wanting this leather jacket.

[ellie101]

Awww. Thanks so much Alorin! *hugs!*

I'm really glad that you liked it! And I kept the timeline sort of vague, but Toby is definitely a young adult. So it's been a while since she was in the Labyrinth.

Yes, it's a one-shot. Hehe. I am fickle, hear me roar. I actually started writing just dialog (from the beginning of the fic) a couple of days ago and I went in and filled in the details and all of the other stuff yesterday.

Thank you! :) I'm so thrilled that you liked it!

[dmacabre]

Very nice! Great imagery with the sandcastle and the dream caving in, and the editing of the dream diary made me giggle only to have it end on another melancholy (and very apropos) note. This stands very well on its own as a poignant piece of writing, but it would also make a good beginning to a longer fanfic.

[ellie101]

Thank you so much! :D

I particularly liked the sandcastle part... ;) So I'm so happy that you did too!

Thanks so much for the review! I noticed we have a lot of mutual friends, so do you mind if I friend you?

[dmacabre]

Not at all, go ahead. I've added you, too. I recognized your name from FFnet and Digital Quill. :)

[ellie101]

:) Hehe. I saw that! I gave myself an inner kick for being so unobservant. Lol.

I recognized you from Digital Quill and fanfic in general as well!