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Last of Days - Kingdom Wars Part One

Jul 11, 2009 23:12

Title: Last of Days - Kingdom Wars
Characters: Eunhyuk/Tablo, other characters t.b.d.
Author: Linh/ElmersGlue128
Rating: R
Length: Part 1 out of 3
Genre: Fantasy AU / Action / Epic Drama (I've offically gone crazy, this is why...)
Words: 2,102

Summary: Secretly taking his sister's place, Eunhyuk disguised as a woman is sent by the king on a ( Read more... )

last of days - kingdom wars

Comments 34

Spot! for Madelyn! elliebear128 July 12 2009, 06:29:07 UTC

for the B-day Girl!!! <3333

Re: Spot! for Madelyn! madelyn93 July 12 2009, 13:30:48 UTC

ohmygod.
YOU CAN'T STOP THERE.
HOW CAN YOU STOP THERE?
DON'T STOP T_T

♥♥♥♥
this is just awesome. and really really creative. i don't think i've read somethign like this before.
rawr, i need to know how blo reacts when he finds out that hyuk doesn't have boobs xD

are you sure tablos all that badass though? i think he's more of a kitten (a kitten that looks way too old due to the drinking habits and smoking but a kitten nevertheless!) than hyukjae.

and thank you for the wish!! i get such a brilliant fic dedicated to me dnfsdklfls
(gif. keels me dead. i haev to keep reminding myself that HAEs the favourite *sneaks another glance at hyuk* yup. hae is the favourite. i think.)

Re: Spot! for Madelyn! elliebear128 July 29 2009, 22:53:04 UTC

This is a horribly late reply *hangs head*

It's really hard sometimes to remember Hae is the fave when Hyuk moves his chest and hips so darn well :DD

Hhhahaha, they are BOTH kittens (I'm not sure Tablo has an actual badass bone inside of him, I'm pretty sure I could easily beat him up with my pinky if we had gone to the same school back during his college days :D).

Hope you had an awesome b-day though! I WILL get this done for you soon with hot smut Okay, more like a sadly try to attempt, haha! ;D

Spot! elliebear128 July 12 2009, 06:30:27 UTC

for Ana <3 Slarya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Spot! slarya July 12 2009, 12:46:13 UTC

LJ is evil and ate my first comment =(

OMFG!!!! *hyperventilates*

OK...I'm calm now not really, lets just pretend I'm not fangirling

First of all, I had to read it three times before commenting, this is how much the whole story is addicting.

I loved the beginning, the middle, the ending, I felt like I was watching a movie the entire time. I was literally glued to the screen xD

Tablo is just so EPIK in this fic, his brilliant mind just works in ways I absolutely love, like him trying to seduce Hyuk being just a scheme to make the boy try to attack him <3333

The whole scene of their talking adjgujadj what can I say besides perfect?
The kiss omo I literally died in that part and I read it more than the three timesAnd this should come with a warning for overload hotness because Tablo just kills it and we might need tissues for our nose bleed xD ( ... )

Re: Spot! elliebear128 July 29 2009, 23:06:36 UTC

Evil LJ, how dare you do that?!! *kicks it for you*

LOL, you have me grinning like a total fool :DD Your comment is just SOOOO awesome and I am currently hugging it right now! Seriously, love you <3 I've had so little free time lately and that was totally rushed :D You made me feel a lot better *huggs crazily*

WE are epik girls! Remember our Epik Crew?! MC Kato and DJ Linz rules! hahha. In these days, I SWEAR we have to meet up in Korea! (Admittedly, I've been drooling nonstop...why is Hae so HOT?!!! Why is EunHae dancing together so freaking HOT?!!)

Ohhh, have you listened to remixing the human soul yet?

Re: Spot! slarya July 30 2009, 16:55:48 UTC

I was seriously fangirling while typing that comment, but lets just ignore that small fail fact, shall we? ;D

Omg I know, Hae just killed me with his Don't Don performance from Super Show 2, man that was fierce and hot and totally NOT innocent -which I not-so secretly love-

His "fight" with Hyuk was beyond awesome and I just want the concert DVD like right now xD and omg his arms...I mean his freaking hot arms *drools*

I only heard some songs from RTHS, I'm still waiting for the CD and I'll probably only fully hear it after I come back from the vacations.
From what I heard I really liked it, except one or two songs like Fly^^

and maybe Pieces part II will come out in September? now that I'm really dieing to hear :D

Spot! elliebear128 July 12 2009, 06:34:12 UTC

for Ali <3 Chibi_Roses

You're probably busy with packing and heading to the airport soon so this spot will be here for you when you're back :D I feel like I miss you already <3

Re: Spot! chibi_roses July 12 2009, 10:34:49 UTC

I debated over reading this because I won't really be able to read updates for a while and I might drive myself mad with wanting to know what happens next. But I read it anyway :D

And yes, I'm going to be driven mad, but never mind.

The King's plan was kinda interesting, send him a load of girls and try get them to kill him if possible. Bless Hyukkie, doing this for his sister.

I'm not surprised Tablo noticed Hyuk out of all the others. I laughed at this That and they said I looked really ridiculous in dresses. I should wear pants instead

The whole scene between Tablo and Hyuk was beautifully written. Tablo being able to read souls doesn't really surprise me. I want to know what happens now!!!!!

I wanted to do a longer comment but I have more packing to do and various other bits and a 1500 word essay that I need to email to my friend so she can hand it in for me, which I really should have done earlier and argh, too much to do!

I'll miss you too <33

Re: Spot! elliebear128 July 29 2009, 23:31:43 UTC

YO! And you're back! I didn't get much done, did I? :D

Ah, the King's Plan. Very crack!tastic, yes? Oh, I personally prefer a ship full of hot guys instead. That would be even stranger to try to reason that into the story :DD

On a random note, I tried reading a few het-fics recently and why are they so bad? Why are the girls always so whiny and, for lack of a better word, so...girly? And it's always the same things: love contract, fake marriage, abrasive girl at school and the popular guy. lol, this reminds me why 2 hot guys together in fics are bettter :DD

Re: Spot! chibi_roses July 30 2009, 21:11:12 UTC

I'm sure you did lots of thinking about it ( ... )

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Spot! elliebear128 July 12 2009, 06:35:53 UTC

for Kai <3 todefinebeauty

*heavy sigh* I SO want to be in Vancouver right now :D

Re: Spot! todefinebeauty July 12 2009, 07:40:32 UTC

!!!!!!!!

!!!!!!!

Omg, Linh. This is just unbelievable. The whole time Tablo and Hyuk were talking I was absolutely glued to the screen, like probably unhealthily so. I actually sat back and exhaled after this part, because I was holding my breath as they were talking and my mind was going oh shit shit shit HYUK HE'S GONNA KNOW HE'S A GUY GAHHH. AND YOU CAN'T HAVE TABLO KILL HYUK BEFORE ANYTHING'S REALLY HAPPENED D: but of course he won't, right? :D

The flickering light from the candles nearby show a shadowy illumination of the faint imprint of lipstick on top of the lines running across Tablo’s palm and he closes his fingers into a fist as if he’s holding onto something. That was brilliant, the lipstick on his palm and him curling his fingers into it as though he's holding onto what's between them - Hyuk's disguise, the King's plan for destroying the rebel leader - and Tablo's holding onto that idea that there is that divide between the two sides... hmm it made sense in my head, maybe I'll have to read the rest to fully get that ( ... )

Re: Spot! elliebear128 July 29 2009, 23:54:39 UTC

lol, with my plots, don't bother reading too deep or thinking too hard about any of it because it's usually total crack with a million wth? plot twists that were totally awesome for a moment until it makes no logical sense :D For some reason, I can't handle balancing or working out anything too complex in terms of plot inside my head but I still write it out anyways, hahah.

ohh, how are you liking remixing the human soul? It's like half and half for me right now, some are good (remap the soul!!! and back to the future!!!) and some were just ehh to me (you are the one and fly...)

(i have such a long list to things I'm responding to for you and I swear I'm going to get it sent soon! ANd I'm so excited to read your ShiHan, you have no idea!! :DD)

Re: Spot! todefinebeauty July 30 2009, 00:22:40 UTC

LOL I think I could analyze the heck out of anything, that's just me thinking too hard about everything XD just to warn you beforehand, this reply is probably going to be sort of all over the place because it is SO freaking HOT here, like seriously all I did today after jogging in the morning (bad idea... it was already like 25C at 8am, I was DYING when I got home) was some variation of sit/stand/lie flat on the floor and sweat and try to not let any part of my body touch any other part of my body. My mind is just mush.. which means I haven't gotten anything written since that ShiHan of epic proportions. It like, drained me of my life, almost 8000 words, mostly written the day it was due *dies forever* haha I didn't end up going with rhythm gymnasts, though. It would probably have been even more epic if I had ( ... )

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Spot! elliebear128 July 12 2009, 06:37:06 UTC

for Nhi! (fabricles)

<33 <33 <3333 33

Re: Spot! runawayxxlovee August 22 2009, 19:39:13 UTC

LINH OMG. THIS WAS SO EPIK AND I'M ABOUT TO GO READ PART TWO BUT OMG, OMG. some of this was so real and then hyuk in a frickin' dress. the 'i can read souls' part totally killed me. and i don't know why but tablo calling hyuk a baby cat was just like hothothot, please make out some more with said baby cat nao, plz. is that weird? >>

The flickering light from the candles nearby show a shadowy illumination of the faint imprint of lipstick on top of the lines running across Tablo’s palm and he closes his fingers into a fist as if he’s holding onto something. and kind of that whole paragraph ;-;

now that i've calmed down, this kind of reminds me of mulan, but not XD;

good job linh :D