Last of Days - Kingdom Wars Part Two

[elliebear128]

Title: Last of Days - Kingdom Wars
Characters: Eunhyuk/Tablo, Donghae, Tukutz
Author: Linh/ElmersGlue128
Rating: R (ok, more like PG-13 until part 3)
Length: Part 2 out of 3
Genre: Fantasy AU / Action / Epic Drama (I've offically gone crazy, this is why...)
Words: 3,070
Summary: Secretly taking his sister's place, Eunhyuk disguised as a woman is

Comments

formatting fail *facepalms*

[todefinebeauty]

*WEEPS WITH JOY*

I love this. I love Donghae and Tukutz (!), I love the little angsty bit about Tablo being the boy that rises to lead the people, I love:

"...And you have an Adam’s apple, silly!” Donghae says with a teasing poke at the other’s neck...

...because I've always wondered how, in fics where someone is dressed as a girl, no one notices that they're a boy when Adam's apples exist. I also love:

“You knew? Since last night? You were playing with me?” Eunhyuk growls furiously and points the eaten drumstick in his hand accusingly at the other.

“Are you planning to poke me to death with that? It might take a while,” Tablo comments wryly and takes a seat at the edge of the bed, “Did you sleep well?”

Eunhyuk glares and chooses to continue to stuff his mouth with food, taking a generous sip of juice from his cup.

“Your cover’s been blown, I could have you executed right now and you’re still eating?” Tablo questions pointedly.

“I’m starving,” Eunhyuk answers indignantly...because even being captured, he'll still answer to his

Re: formatting fail *facepalms*

[elliebear128]

OH GOD, as soon as I read over the part where you quoted "Are you going to mewl for me now", I totally started blushing *embarrassed* LOL, I. can't. believe. I. actually. wrote. that. Sometimes I really question my sanity! What next? aliens!blohyuk with a million tentacles having sex? Why don't I start working on that and you start on your ShiHan rhythmic gymnasts? Then we can, I don't know, combine them together at the end? That will surely be EPIK then, haha. oh snap, there goes our lame joke

Re: formatting fail *facepalms*

[todefinebeauty]

HAHA as soon as I READ that part I was like ":O!! Linh!!" LOL but no, it worked really well and wasn't weird at all. IN FACT IT WAS SEXY. The only lol-worthy part of it was that it was Tablo, who is so unmanly at times it's amazing. But since it's AU!Tablo, I can take it haha xD

Aliens!blohyuk and rhythmic gymnasts!shihan? SOUNDS GOOD. Tentacles and ribbons are somewhat similar anyway! Oh God, I don't know if I want to go any further than that HAHA.

YOU CAN DO IT, LINH!! Practice does make perfect I think, though, lol, what would I know about writing smut >_>" omg, post-concert, band!verse smut with Tablo is so hard to write. I'm so stuck with the one I told you about T_T

Tukutz I have no qualms with

...Does this mean there's HaeKutz smut in the works?! 8).

I have seen that clip, omg, I cracked up when Mithra came in with the febreeze. Poor Allen, LOL I can't imagine working with those guys XD

Re: formatting fail *facepalms*

[elliebear128]

Yeahhhh, and MYK was asking for pocket money b/c he wanted to go out?!! Was it Tukutz who brought a freaking plunger b/c the toilet is clogged?!! lol, I could watch that clip over and over again :DDD

hmmm, there is a haekutz piece I'm working on but I'm doubting there is going to be much smut in there unless it's possible for them to have sex a a subway station but I think New Yorkers will say that subways are actually pretty damn gross in actuality :DDD That and I'm not sure just how much smutiness is actually in me to pull out, hhaha. I'm actually working on a KyuHae that was requested on a sj smut meme (tutor!kyu, haha) and that is already got me going O_o ??????!!!!! The idea sounds hot but I don't want to end up messing it up, lol. That and I'm having serious trouble FINISHING anything like you mentioned before! It's totally not coming out the way I want them to inside my head *frustrated* rawr! lol

[iamahim]

*squeals*

ive been waiting for this
theyre both just so huggable in this ♥

gah... cant wait till next update

[elliebear128]

blohyuk is definitely lovable (in any shape or form)! <3

Yay, I'm super glad you like it so far! lol, I am working on how that next scene in the upcoming last chapter will unfold :D Hopefully hot?^^

Thank you ;D

[seungjea]

OMG
finally this story is up!
i saw your earlier post when you made the vid and i was hooked!
but ... there'll be only 3 parts of this? O,o
i hope more is coming!!
thanks for sharing, i love this!!!
* squeals *

[elliebear128]

Reading your comment made me really happy ;D Yay, I'm so glad to hear you've been following this story <333

More will definitely be following, I'll be looking forward to seeing what you'll think of it! Thank YOU!

[tealsilver]

Dang Linh. DANG.

I missed your amazing obscure script, you know? Ugh, I feel horrible for not keep track of your fics.

I miss BloHyuk SO MUCH. School's been a real, well, you know and it's currently exam time. BUT THIS FIC JUST TOTALLY BROUGHT OUT MY DAY (which is starting right now) and now, I'm so inspired to print the rest of your fics which I OH SO LOVE.

I can't wait to see part three~ :)

[elliebear128]

I MISS YOU EVEN MORE D:
Sounds serious enough? Good, because I miss your drabbles/poetry/randomness. :D You need to post something soon so I read something beautiful again <3 Always really awesome hearing from you though!....school is MOST DEFINITELY a freakin pain (I'm nearing the end of my summer classes so exams are coming too, fucccccccccck) Good luck on yours though!

[dexterka92]

oMG omG cannot wait!!! next part please!!! XD

[elliebear128]

lol, I'm working on it ;D

Thank you for reading!~