Runaway Boy

[elliebear128]

Title: Runaway Boy

Characters: Tukutz/Donghae

Author: Linh/ElmersGlue128

Rating: PG

Length: one-shot

Words: 1,769

Summary: [SJ and Epik High pre-debut] In an empty subway, a runaway boy meets a dancing boy. Tukutz's p.o.v.
Dedicated: to

Comments

[todefinebeauty]

ASL;FKJAL;KFJ MMMGHHFHH *KEYSMASHING AND INCOHERENCY*

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[todefinebeauty]

FIRST OF ALL: HAEKUTZ. OH, HAEKUTZ. THIS MAKES ME WANT TO WORK ON MINE TOO but ahhh wips, wips *dies*

Gah, love Tukutz with the Epik High flyers, and the fact that he only has five dollars in his wallet, and they were caught illegally taping them up - it reminds you that they weren't crafted and sent out into a debut like idol groups of large entertainment companies are. That image of them flying away from him when he stands up, too - really nice. And him jumping the tracks to get to Donghae's side :D

And the gay porn DVD!! :DDDD and there's even some HaeKutz action-that-isn't-quite but, still, awesome! The small kisses and making sure to tell Donghae that letting guys stay the night in exchange for sexual favors isn't normal behaviour XD Hae seems so innocent in this, and if you think about it, he really does seem like he would be compared to Tukutz. Though I suppose the same could be said for BloHyuk ;D but maybe that's what the appeal of it is, that innocence/naivety versus the knowledge/experience of the world

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[todefinebeauty]

OKAY I MADE ONE JUST FOR THIS

On a slightly related note, have you seen these early pictures of Epik High?!

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[todefinebeauty]

actually I don't know if Tukutz' hair is bleached, it might be the light - but either way, omg. I'll stop spamming you now, lol.

[yesunglover]

I love it! I simply love the feel of it. Everything and every time you write feels so real like its actually happening and I can see their expressions and what they do in my head. You're gifted bb! I'm crazy about the way you write!

[elliebear128]

THANK YOU <333

Your comment makes me super happy ;D I'm so proud/glad/ecstatic to have you as a reader <3

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[yesunglover]

well I'm tracking you actually but it didn't come out in my inbox I don't know why TT__TT

[imsweet_11]

this is awesome^^ love love love^^

[elliebear128]

thank you~ <3 <3

You're awesome ;D

[slarya]

omg this was just perfect! now Haekutz and Blohyuk can go together rule the world because they're just kickass pairings like that xD

love how instead of an AU you decided to write them both in the beginning of their careers, the way you show how EH struggled to get where they are today and everyone dispersing when they're caught doing illegal stuff lol

Tukutz putting up this cool attitude in front of Hae it's just unbelievable cute :D and him spending his last 5 dollars and last box of ramen packages with the boy asjasudhsd *dies*

"you don’t want him misunderstanding this is normal behavior, you letting guys stay the night in exchange for sexual favors" what is your dirty little mind thinking Tukutz? Hae just kissed you good-night xD though I dare myself say Hae wouldn't really mind that much if it turned out that way

this was a really nice beginning for all the Haekutz I'm sure off you'll write in the future, loved it to death <33333

ps: good-luck with your finals, Hwaiting! ;D

[elliebear128]

LOL, I probably wouldn't have minded either if things had escalated further between hae and tukutz :DDD Hmm, I totally waiting for someone to take up that momentous project but if no one does, I think I might have to eventually

:D Oh gosh, why is everything I'm thinking about writing lately keeps involving smut?! Maybe I'm the one who needs to get my head out of the gutter^^

haha, haekutz and blohyuk, maybe even the four of them other. omg, it makes me suddenly want to write blohyukhaekutz, haha. I'm not sure how that would work out but ohhh, it sounds like it would be good. A major smut fest? hahha. I'm obviously too thrilled by that idea :DDD

[madelyn93]

ah~ been a while since someone wrote haekutz.
(i'm trying to mainstream it like how blohyuk is these days)

he becomes your music box with the twirling ballerina that still sits abandoned and gathering dust in your mom’s long-emptied room because you hate knowing how much you loved watching it while she puts on make-up in front of the vanity mirror or how she left, selfish and vain. It’s been so long since you’ve remembered.
i like this detail ♥

and i like the fact that you used jungshik. i always thought jungshik was so.. anticool. but then i realised tukutz was anything but cool so it fits :D

this a nice, weirdly calming little piece :D
and idk, it has you written all over it. you have this unique style of writing that i just can't place.

[elliebear128]

yeah, totally agree, tukutz is too much of a dork to be "cool" (well, let me extend that to all of EH :DD). Have you seen that mapthesoul clip of him dancing to the new bep song in the office? LOL.

Is jungshik an embarrassing/uncool name in Korean? I haven't the slightest clue, ohhh, what about Tablo's real Korean name? How's his?

ah, starting the haekutz movement? I'll definitely try to help out ;D ohhh, but ever since that haeblo you wrote, I'm a little fixated on them tooo :D Makes me wanna try them out. Look what random things you've got me wanting to do now^^

[madelyn93]

sunwoong and jungshik are actually pretty normal (read as: boring) names. though if people mispronounce jungshik (jeongshik), they could mean a chinese restaurant (joongshik) xD ~random~
you knows what a seriously uncool name? seulong from 2am. his name sounds like an ahjuhsshi's name xDh

xD i like haeblo more than haekutz. only written one haekutz myself. thats not setting a good example :D

[elliebear128]

ohh, another question. How about Donghae? The literal transaction is east sea? I think I once told this Korean friend about Donghae and he was like ??? for a second with it...is that a really unusual or uncommon name?

lol, yeahh, Hae and Blo together is good stuff. But I also get the feeling you think blohyukhae is even better^^