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elliebear128

By Chance

Nov 03, 2009 22:35

Title: By Chance

Characters: Yesung/Ryeowook

Author: Linh/ElmersGlue128

Rating: PG

Length: one-shot

Words: 1,610

Summary: One's in culinary school, barely surviving. The other's a mail boy at an office downtown, bored to death. Once in the morning and once at night, they see each other on the bus every day, but they've never once talked to each other. [ ( Read more... )

yesung/ryeowook, by chance, happy b-day ali!

Comments 29

SPOT!!! for ALI!!! elliebear128 November 4 2009, 06:34:32 UTC

[Bday Girl] <3<3<3

H A P P Y H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y ! ! ! ! ! !

Re: SPOT!!! for ALI!!! chibi_roses November 4 2009, 17:13:21 UTC

LINH This was totally unexpected, thank you so much!

I loved the fic, it was so adorable, I liked their progression from just strangers who take all opportunities to stare at each other, to actually taking the plunge and talking to each other (and what an amusing conversation, but it was filled with food and so I approve) to actually being together <33

It is crazy, this is why I love LJ because it has enabled me to talk to people who I would probably have never known existed because they're from other countries far away or just people I wouldn't really come into contact with, but I'm really really really glad I did as otherwise I would not have known what I was missing out on.

I LOVE YOU TOO. Hope things are going well for you, and you don't have as much work as you did.

Re: SPOT!!! for ALI!!! elliebear128 November 9 2009, 21:04:33 UTC

Sooooo, did you do anything fun for your b-day? Heck, have you been up to anything fun besides school and classes and hmwk (which is ALWAYS fun, of course)? The last time I had any of that was back in Sept (i think? It feels so long ago now) when my roommates and I went up to Vancouver, Canada for the weekend...ohhh, we visited an ice cream shop with over 200 flavors!...I was in heaven. :DDD Things, especially the weather, has been so darn dull lately, even had hail/thunder/lightning/boring!blackouts the other night, ehh. Ok, I'll stop ranting now, tell me about you! Something exciting, like you were fighting dragons and dinosaurs and defeated them with a toothpick all in order to save Yesung? Yes?

Re: SPOT!!! for ALI!!! chibi_roses November 9 2009, 21:29:09 UTC

Uh on the actual day I was home alone, because my school gave us 2 days off before our week off (and then we had the Monday after that off, it was so good) and everyone else in my family was out, but on the Sunday I had a meal with some close friends and then on the weekend I went up to London for the London expo, which was basically an anime con, a friend of mine had invited me so I went up with another friend. It was so good but we felt out of place because we hadn't cosplayed and we felt we should have joined in.

200 flavours? Wow. How did you pick? I didn't even know that number of flavours was possible. I clearly need to broaden my ice cream experiences.

How did you know? Well, it was some nifty work with a lightbulb and some toothpaste instead of a toothpick, but close enough. Um, what have I done since the last time I had the pleasure of conversing with you? Nothing much, finally getting somewhere with my driving, hopefully I can take (and pass) my test soon, applying to universities, nothing really stands out, sadly.

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tehgirlwonder November 4 2009, 07:12:19 UTC

MY BIRTHDAY WAS TWO DAYS AGO.
CAN I CLAIM THIS AS WELL?

Haha, I'm kidding. :)

I just laughed so hard at Yesung's chicken line.
And Wookie's reply got another chuckle from me...
I think I woke up my mother...XD

Wookie and Yesung and are just so adorable~

I love this to bits, and I am memming it because it's just that great.

elliebear128 November 9 2009, 21:08:27 UTC

Oh good, so at least someone got my sometimes rather odd humor and didn't just go @_@ at that chicken line! :DD

I love Yewook to bits and you too for your comment ;D

P.S. Happy belated Birthday!!!!!!! <33

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elliebear128 November 9 2009, 21:11:39 UTC

:DDD YeWook = ultimate cuteness.

It's so awesome hearing from you, as always, thank you!

<33333

p.s. Writing Yesung is quite addicting, isn't it? I can't seem to stop now that I've started^^

thundersquall November 4 2009, 07:23:02 UTC

Omg I loved this, it's so sweet, and completely adorable, and Ali is going to LOVE this to death!

I liked how you developed this, from how they went from just staring to each other to how they started talking (and that first convo made me explode from the cute), and then Ryeowook baking baguettes for Yesung, AWWWW. The ending was lovely too, the both of them finally together and living together.

sadkjfkjsda Such a sweet story, I loved this so much. 8DDDD

elliebear128 November 9 2009, 21:20:34 UTC

:DDDD Yay, so glad to hear you say that! I don't normally write fluff too much but yewook is just too happy and cute a couple to do otherwise^^ Yesung is a little too oddball and Ryeowook a little too spunky not to be totally perfect for each other :D

Thank you <3 Your comment is totally <3333333! *hugs*

todefinebeauty November 4 2009, 08:43:55 UTC

LINHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ♥ I MISSED YOU AUGH. I missed your writing, too! Every time I read something you write I get reminded of how awesome you are at picking at little things and describing them in this unique way that always just... gets it. Like, Yesung lets out a chompy yawn and takes a furtive bite out of thin air - what a cute image ^^ I like how you described Yesung before he goes to band practice too, and then that line, He’s afraid he’ll otherwise disappear into oblivion, just a faceless passerby in a crowd of people. He hops off at his stop. - gah, perfeeecttt.

And aughh, I loved that whole last bit! Especially when they're getting off the bus and how you described the heartbeats, and when they're running... you always have this way of writing those little oddities in life, ack, I love it ♥ ♥

I hope your classes aren't too killer this term! ... can't say the same for myself though, ahah.

p.s.
His backpack is securely on his lap until his arms become too slack with sleep and it slides with a soft thump onto the floor.I can ( ... )

Hello, stranger! elliebear128 November 9 2009, 21:36:35 UTC

IT'S BEEN SO LOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T EVEN BELIEVE IT! Where did the time go?...where did the sun go?! I didn't even realize how long I'd been gone until I looked at the last time I posted something, ehhh. Seriously, thank your for you comment! I have to admit, when I was writing this, all I was honestly thinking about was food...and what I was planning to eat at that time :DDD As you obviously could tell from reading ( ... )

Re: Hello, stranger! todefinebeauty November 10 2009, 21:54:48 UTC

Urgh I feel like that too! Summer~ where did you go~~ T_T are you still on hiatus? It feels like we haven't talked over lj in foreverrr. LOL I can see how food was on the mind... lots of food references in here! It totally works though, it's so cute.

I loveee having such a short school week, I have to say ahah! Four day weekends are awesome! But since I have so long to sleep in and etc., Tuesday mornings are the worst... haha. 8am classes @_@ really not a lot of exciting things that aren't related to school going on here (the most exciting was me trying and failing to write a fic for the winged suju contest... ahah urgh.) A Fine Frenzy! :D I really liked Where the Wild Things Are.. though to be honest I cried at the end LOL, geez. I started working in a psychology lab which is kinda exciting! It's really interesting so it doesn't really feel like work :D

OMG TUKUTZ ;______________; did you see the pictures of him with his CREW CUT HAIR?! It's a long wait til 2012...

...creepy, Linh! D: I'm never sleeping on the bus again.

Re: Hello, stranger! elliebear128 November 18 2009, 20:08:21 UTC

*ahhhhhhhh, I wrote this really long, rambling thing and then I accidentally pressed some keys and it all disappeared!!!! AHHH, I SUCK! ...I can't remember what I wrote D ( ... )