Roadside

Mar 03, 2010 03:45

Title: Roadside
Characters: Hangeng/Yesung
Author: ElmersGlue128
Rating: NC-17
Length: one-shot
Words: 2,411
Dedicated: to omgorgasm. Omg, I love you so much that I *attempted* YeHan with a side of smut. It didn’t turn out slutty though, ha. *rolls over and dies* You totally brainwashed me, evil bitch.  
Summary: Hangeng bumps heads with Yesung, literally, ( Read more... )

turtle goes chomp on your finger, title: roadside, hangeng/yesung

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ddangkkoma March 3 2010, 20:34:40 UTC
this was really cute and i liked the idea overall. the ending bit about ddangkkoma was just effing precious. it kinda softens the harder tones of the fic and gives it a sense of hope

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elliebear128 March 9 2010, 00:42:21 UTC
*notices your name* Cute :D

Super glad to hear you liked it!~ That's exactly the kind of ending I was goign for, hopeful~

Thank you!~~ <3

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dandanfung March 3 2010, 21:38:26 UTC
Spotting this to read later <33333333333333

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dandanfung March 4 2010, 00:06:35 UTC
That was really reallly realllly good. The subtle details you included were just enough to make it work, without overshowering the piece with flowery language.

The vivid descriptions were excellent. Very very nice read. <3

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elliebear128 March 9 2010, 00:38:51 UTC
That's so wonderful to hear, glad you liked it!~ ^^

Thank~you~! <3

:D

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mayshy March 4 2010, 02:50:39 UTC
omg! i think u have made me into a YeHan lover!!! omg!! this was so hat, yet sad at the same time, their lives are so sad, but they have each other ^^

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elliebear128 March 9 2010, 00:37:24 UTC
Yay, another YeHan lover!~ Welcome, welcome~ :D

Thank you!~~ <3

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yeonnie March 4 2010, 07:43:16 UTC
THIS. IS. AMAZING.
OMG YEHAN, I'M BRAINWASHED TOO!!!!!
i love the details, the images are so vivid, you managed to give them a sense of reality and made everything flow smoothly. Awesome work~ <3

the ending softened the entire fic, dangkkoma is so adorable and he never fails to make me smile xD Gah, Yesung and his turtle >///<

Very few YeHan going around, and this has got to be the best one i've read. Thanks for sharing dear!

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elliebear128 March 9 2010, 00:35:14 UTC
haha, WELCOME TO THE DARK SIDE. er, maybe it's the light side? I can't really imagine a single dark bone in either hangeng or yesung. For brainwashing, it doesn't feel too bad, eh?^^

What a huge compliment, THANK YOU!~ <3

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<3333333 elliebear128 March 9 2010, 19:18:24 UTC
Phhhuuuuoooooonnnggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~~~ Pi<333 (I don't know why I didn't make the connection earlier! I saw this comment and just blanked completely that it was you!)

*cries* I just realized that I actually didn't reply to your AWESOME AMAZING WONDERFUL comment that you left me with all the kyuhae links! T_T I totally thought I responded inside my head but I was checking through my old emails and I didn't. THANK YOU FOR THOSE. You totally made my day, you have no idea! *hugs*

lol, soooooooo how's life and school? Are you still reading smut during class and getting caught by the teacher?^^ :DD Are you still utterly infatuated with HeeTeuk? Tell me everything :D

With LOTS of love.

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g_myzo March 4 2010, 15:57:01 UTC
lol at that ending. XD
this was completely wonderful. i loved it lots~
<3 ^_^

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elliebear128 March 9 2010, 00:28:12 UTC
The turtle totally rules. :D

Thank you! >.< Glad you liked it!~

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