Piece of Mind

Apr 14, 2010 03:43


Title: Piece of Mind
Characters: Kyuhyun/Yesung
Author: ElmersGlue128
Rating: NC-17 (explicit sex)
Length: one-shot
Words: 3,755
Dedicated: to g_myzo, who requested this prompt ( here) literally a million years ago^^  Pretty sure you'd be ok with the rating, or else skip that part? *facepalms*
Summary: Kyuhyun and Yesung are strangers who live in the same ( Read more... )

kyuhyun/yesung, piece of mind

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mayshy April 14 2010, 23:56:38 UTC
lol, the turtle excuse XD

and wow.... kyu erased some of his memory? 0___0

and wow that was hot! kyusung <3

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elliebear128 May 5 2010, 05:50:30 UTC
Thank you!~ ~

^_________^

kyusung~ <333

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eundaesi April 15 2010, 00:06:25 UTC
GOD.....
Kyu, at least you found Yesung
Forget your past love....
be happy with Yesung...
hope read your another fanfic soon
fighting ^^

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elliebear128 May 5 2010, 05:51:42 UTC
Aw, that's so sweet~ Thank you!~~~

^_______^

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synchronata April 15 2010, 04:07:03 UTC
Whoa. I like. A lot.

The second I saw KyuSung on miracle (Which really is a miracle; I never check there anymore), all that went through my mind was "What luck! -clicks and reads fic over and over again-"

I really really REALLY like this. The details and descriptions make me swoon (because I'm such a detail-oriented geek), and the story and plot itself just felt very original to me :DD

Definitely memming this~

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elliebear128 May 5 2010, 05:54:52 UTC
Thanks!~ ;D I'm so glad to hear you liked it!~~~~~

KyuSung <3

*hugs*

p.s. *curious* why don't you check miracle anymore?

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synchronata May 6 2010, 00:23:25 UTC
You're welcome~ It was a pleasure to read ^^

-hugs back- <33

Oh, I don't really check miracle, because it runs rampant with "canon" pairings I'm not really fond of ^^;

And no offense to anybody, but I tend to be picky with whose writing I read... >.<

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elliebear128 May 6 2010, 01:07:32 UTC
I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND. THE CANON PAIRINGS. DRIVES ME CRAZY. If I see one more eunhae...qmi...ugh. What are you not fond of (understatement, eh?)? The problem with how rampant they are is that the writing gets really repetitive and ehh...

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yeonnie April 15 2010, 06:25:26 UTC
KYUSUNG!!!!!!!!!!
I. LOVE. YOU *fangirls over you forever*
This pairing is climbing up on my OTP list <333333 KYUSUNG <3333333333

I can't possibly tell you how much i love this and how much i love you for writing this. Actually, i read it last night, printed it and brought it to school, read it again during Literature (had all my friends staring at me) and forgot i was gonna have an Biology test the next period. If i fail, i blame you. YOU. Y.O.U!!!!!!! *sobsob*

Back to the comment.
I somehow knew Kyu lived in that house. Oh God, the whole idea is creepy and brilliant. The feeling of déjà-vu was really well described, it just keeps the readers's eyes glued on the screen and makes them scroll down and down <3

“Really?” he asks confusedly, seriousness momentarily replacing the intense dread while he scratches his head, “Mine’s always really slow and confused.” - And people ask me why Yesung is so awesome xDDD

Gasping for the short spurts of obtainable air between his sinking fall under the darken depths beyond conscious reality that ( ... )

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elliebear128 May 5 2010, 06:14:50 UTC
I. SERIOUSLY. LOVE. YOU. TOO.
YOUR COMMENTS ALWAYS MAKE ME REALLY HAPPY AND LAUGH MY HEAD OFF, ESPECIALLY IF I'M IN A NOT SO GREAT MOOD...YOU ALWAYS ALWAYS MAKE ME FEEL BETTTTTER. ;DD

I have to admit, KyuSung is pretty nice but, for some reason, I'm always slightly a bit more bias towards KyuHae and then YeHae :DDDD

Better, question, how did you do on your biology test? :DD Maybe smut can help stimulate a student's mind beforehand so they can do better on tests. :DDDD This could totally be proven someday... :DDDD

Thank you~~~ *HUGS* :DDDD
P.S. I TOTALLY ADORE YOUR LONG COMMENTS! SO MUCH <333

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minsonrii April 15 2010, 09:14:13 UTC
OMFG...ONE OF THE HOTTEST SMUTS I'VE EVER READ SO FAR(w/c i think counts a thousand already)OMGOMGOMG...horny KYU..HOLY SH...SO HOT!8D i dunno but Yesung's weirdness is just soo... 8D
btw i really loved your approach on their personalities in this fic...well it really fits them...XD

oh this is really good~~~ you're so awesome!<3
I rarely find KyuSung around so...Good Job!!!!!

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elliebear128 May 5 2010, 06:17:43 UTC
Wow, first out of a thousand smuts, I am definitely honored :DDDD
Horny Kyu is always good, yeah? :D

I'm super glad you like the personalizations! Thank you!~~~~

^________^

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