Echo Through

[elliebear128]

Title: Echo Through
Characters: Kyuhyun/Donghae
Author: ElmersGlue128
Rating: NC-17 (explicit sex, infidelity)
Length: one-shot
Words: 6,454
Summary: As five-year-olds, they become linked by heartbeats because Kyuhyun thought it would be funny. As they grow up, he and Donghae are threaded together by the connection.
Notes: Numbers at the beginning

Comments

[anisole]

oh i love this so much. the progression of their relationship through the years is so true to their characters. i mean, there's kyuhyun who is probably the most precocious child ever and there's donghae who is all child-like innocence, and it was heartbreaking to see them become more jaded as they grow up trying to cope with their fucked up relationship.

your descriptions are so subtle and gorgeous and i loved the undercurrent of emotions throughout the whole fic. the heartbeat concept was brilliant too, and i'm a sucker for angsty wedding stories.

just...so much love for this fic. thank you for writing this. i look forward to reading more from you.

[elliebear128]

Oh thank you so much, I'm so flattered by what you wrote and really glad you were able to pick up all the subtleties that I added in. And, of course, who could resist an angsty wedding? :D

<3<3<3
Much love. ~~

[xiaoninger]

woawwww D:
this was so beautiful a concept--i love how you organized by age, lold at troublemaking kid kyuhyun, squealed whenever their hearts beat together, ached when wife issues came up..
it was fantastic. best kyuhae ever ;A;

[elliebear128]

Aw. Thank you!~~~

What a compliment, smiling happily~

<3
Much love~~

[beyateriz]

I teared up. ;~;
I don't think I've ever read smut that's both really hot and very, very, very, sweet.

“Half a breath,” Donghae utters, “You still owe me half a breath.”
I died. REALLY. It was too much ♥ ♥ ♥

[elliebear128]

Aww, thank you~

^________^

Much love~~
<3

[xsharetheworld]

SPOTTING for now. :3

[xsharetheworld]

DAMN how I love these happy endings. T^T

[elliebear128]

I am a total sucker for happy endings ;)

Thank you~<3

[xsharetheworld]

That's such a good thing. XD
Welcome. <333

[just_me_kalista]

just...beautiful!
what a great sunday afternoon story ^^

i really loved your heart idea and the way the story had a good flow!

[elliebear128]

Thank you! ^________^

<3 <3 <3