Shades of You

May 31, 2010 22:12

Title: Shades of You
Characters: Donghae/Kyuhyun
Author: elliebear128 (formerly elmersglue128)
Rating: R (sexuality, language)
Length: one-shot
Words: 3,507
Requested: by Read more... )

warning: cheesy romance at play~, title: shades of you, donghae/kyuhyun, thinking of you makes me smile

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svtstarlight June 1 2010, 14:07:34 UTC
This is so sweet and cute and...I just love your stories so much. They're poignant and sweet and heartbreaking but have a tiny shred of hope in them... <333333

(thank you lovely, for the sweet v-gift <333)

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elliebear128 June 2 2010, 01:56:24 UTC
Aw, thank you and thank you for all your lovely comments ♥

*hugs*

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bonomanic June 1 2010, 16:16:54 UTC
This is beyond amazing, I'm still wearing a huge smile and feel all fluttery, warm and content inside! And I'm still trying to find proper words to express how utterly, completely wonderful this is. *O* I'm going to read through it again and then will be a bit more specific and coherent, I hope. :D

First off, I absolutely love the title. <3 Perfect for the story. Did it come easy to you ( ... )

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elliebear128 June 2 2010, 06:47:50 UTC
First off I have to say, I love reading your comments ♥ *hugs ( ... )

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bonomanic June 2 2010, 12:13:48 UTC
Thanks, I love reading your fics and your replies! xD ( ... )

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elliebear128 June 4 2010, 22:27:19 UTC
Gina XD kk, now I WILL remember~ College? So it's still your first year? Ah, I remember back then when I was a freshman. Now I'm a third year~ Where are you from, if you don't mind me asking? (DON'T tell me we've already talked about this and I forgot! XD). What other fandoms did you use to write for?

I TOTALLY understand what you mean by being embarrassed by really old stories, especially the ones I ever wrote. I cringe looking at some of them but I don't have the heart to delete any of them, all nostalgic and all. My first writing "attempt" was for this long sj action/AU/gang series, I couldn't even finish the series b/c, like I said, I'm really bad with complicated plot lines and it was all over the place XD *cringe*

Ah, stalking, eh? I do that too, my lj was probably inactive for a year when I first opened it just so I could read fics and lurk XD Just randomly curious, when did you start reading my stories, was it a specific one?

p.s. I'll be excited to see your first works for this fandom XD What pairings did you "test" out?

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paralyzing_time June 1 2010, 21:24:04 UTC
SPOT

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paralyzing_time June 1 2010, 21:41:01 UTC
i always love reading your fics, linh. your writing has this atmospheric quality that i cannot exactly describe, but it flows very nicely and seems to have this adrift feeling. the words are so smooth and your style is to die for. you use the most original images ever and make them work in your story idea. yes, i am incredibly jealous right now.

your sex scenes aren't just smut; they're like art. the way you describe them and your word choice are marvelous, and something i wish i could pull off as well as you do. i am so in love with your writing that i cannot even describe it, and my words do you no justice at all.

my reviews are always redundant. always. i apologize for that, lovely. ;___; you deserve better...

i admit that the idea is a bit cheesy, and i've seen it before, but you execute it so perfectly that i'll let it slide. i always let it slide because you are such an excellent writer. gah, gah, gah, ILU GO WRITE MY FIC

♥♥♥♥♥

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elliebear128 June 2 2010, 07:01:29 UTC
Thank you, baby~ ;D I am indeed set adrift, you described it perfectly.

lol, isn't all romance a bit cheesy? I actually enjoyed writing for this request, it must be the cheesy romantic in me clawing its way out. XD Joking aside, I have to agree though, there is this provocativeness that's missing from that idea. It is really hard to find a totally original prompt/idea nowadays, everything feels like it's been done before. On a positive note though, at least the used ideas are being written now for kyuhae when, I swear, a year and a half ago there was barely anything. Most people only wrote them for the suju 100 challenge and even that wasn't often.

Ah ha, a not so subtle hint, eh? XD ILU TOO, NOW GO WRITE MY FIC BB. I will write your shameless smut involving suits. Wanna throw me a bone to get the mind juices flowing?

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paralyzing_time June 4 2010, 02:27:40 UTC
kyuhae are meant to have this incredibly cheesy romance that is so sweet at the same time ;____; kasjdlskjad;; *squishes the two of them*

LOLOLOL FINEEEEE, BB, I'LL GO WRITE YOUR GLOVE!FUCK

askjldkal it doesn't have to be about suits anymore, but think of how kyuhyun's dancing got better... c:

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babycloud_ai June 2 2010, 08:58:39 UTC
I can't even say how much I love this and how Hae says the most perfect thing and now Kyu's gotten someone who's perfect for him and the last line of the fic is perfect and hell even the title is perfect and bb you're just PERFECTLY BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!

I'm sorry, I just absolutely fail at leaving comments. Whenever I read awesome stuffs they always makes me incoherent and idk, suck my brain away or something *facepalms*

I &hearts YOU!!!!

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elliebear128 June 4 2010, 21:02:46 UTC
Aw, thank you hun!~ I ♥ you too ;D

Your comment gives me all sorts of happy, definitely not fail at all XD

*hugs*

^____^

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thewindchime June 2 2010, 09:50:36 UTC
YOU. You never cease to make me fall even deeper for them. Why so amazing? ;_____;

Seriously, I wish I can put together some coherent words to tell you just how much I love this and how much I love you for writing this. How should I put it? Reading your Kyuhae always leaves me with this fluffy, warm and fuzzy feeling and just so you know, that's what I look for the most in fics. And your works always, like ALWAYS, give me those wonderful feelings ♥

The grass that brushes against their toes as they step bare-footed is not just green, it’s soft and soothing like Donghae’s touch and his smile and his wholehearted love even in the plainest of moments. The sun above them is not just yellow, it’s adoringly basking his skin with affection like every single one of Donghae’s kisses like a promise that everything will be okay no matter what. More than okay.

You own my Kyuhae fangirl heart for the rest of your life, Linh ♥
*hugs*

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elliebear128 June 4 2010, 21:12:47 UTC
Ohh, a heart! *cherishes* You know, I won't ever give it back. ;D

I think it's b/c kyuhae is just irresistible~ XD

Thank you, Vie~ ♥

(aw, Kyu is in remission right now, no magnae sexiness for how long??)

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