Drawing concrit!

May 13, 2011 01:14

I have a quick question! Or maybe it is more concrit I need ( Read more... )

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kernezelda May 13 2011, 01:50:47 UTC
It's very close, but not quite; something about the lips, maybe.
ETA: It's quite lovely, though!

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elliejane May 13 2011, 12:51:11 UTC
Thank you! I have actually gone and changed it up somewhat now, just elaborated on the whole thing. NO ENTIRELY sure it's made a difference, but I think you were right about the lips and I have tinkered there!

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mylittleredgirl May 13 2011, 02:05:08 UTC
I have no idea who Dean is but that's a beautiful drawing and it absolutely looks like a human so you get 10000 points from me!!!

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elliejane May 13 2011, 12:52:32 UTC
Heh, thank you! I have elaborated on the whole thing now, and added a distinctly odd looking Sam, who is his brother in the CW show Supernatural. Also, human is good!!!

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beckieb May 13 2011, 11:16:24 UTC
I do think your technique is great, however, there is just something not quite right. I could 100% tell it was Dean, but maybe it just needs a bit of tweaking. Profiles are hard to get right!
If you post the photo you used as a reference, it might be easier to point out what needs work.
But like I said, great technique and overall, totally a good drawing! :)

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elliejane May 13 2011, 12:56:15 UTC
Thanks for the comments! As you will see I have gone farther with the whole thing now, and added a Sam, who is distinctly dodgy looking! I've tweaked Dean's mouth and chin, rounded it out more I think and put some more shading in.

When I look at Sam side by side on the screen with the original pic I can see all sorts of things that are off. Hoping I can put them right with judicious use of a putty rubber!

Any thoughts??

Eh, looking at the photo, I don't like it at all, but I THINK it looks better than that in real life (bearing in mind it was an Ipod photo!).

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