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FF: But She Breaks

Jun 24, 2011 00:08

Title: But She Breaks
Author: Ellie elliestories
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Post-"Marionette" (3.09)
Summary: She walked away, carried by her emotions as much as her feet.

( Over the faint crackle of dead leaves... )

fringe, fic, olivia

Comments 7

melissa_pbfan June 25 2011, 10:27:43 UTC

Oh that was beautiful; heartbreaking but hopeful at the same time.

elliestories June 25 2011, 14:04:01 UTC

Thank you so much!

coffinwood July 1 2011, 04:32:54 UTC

I'll say it again; this is a wonderful extension of the episode that just feels right. I loved it.

elliestories July 1 2011, 15:43:58 UTC

Thank you very much.

sugangel7 August 3 2011, 06:38:11 UTC

Oh wow, I love the myriad of emotions you have Olivia go through her -- overwhelmed by the irrationality of her emotion before she finds herself calming down and constructing a plan and then OH! the hopeful smile at the end there and you incorporating that bottle...oh I just LOVE it. :)

elliestories August 3 2011, 19:01:40 UTC

Thanks. Even if Olivia isn't the kind of person who lets other people see her messy emotions, she's got to have them, sometime, in the night when no one's watching.

missyvortexdv April 6 2013, 23:09:39 UTC

I like the Olivia you draw her - emotional, letting herself feel but still practical, still strong.