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elliestories

FF: What Things Are, Pt. 1

Sep 07, 2006 00:37

Title: What Things Are
Author: Ellie
Rating: R (for adult themes)
Spoilers: Post-“Who’s Your Daddy?”
Summary: “His bike was in her driveway when she got home, but he was nowhere to be seen, until she entered her living room and his voice rang out in the darkness. ‘You were going to ask me something.’”

( Part 1 )

fic, what things are, h/cuddy, house

Comments 10

crumpled_up September 7 2006, 06:00:08 UTC

Ooo! Another baby story! Yes! This storyline works great for fanfics... provided it's done right, which you have started so far. :D I love your fics and I was so ecstatic when I saw you posted another one! The Big Momma line was just hilarious and completely House. You got this down pat. And it's just the beginning! I can't wait to read the rest. It's wonderful.

When he smiled, she thought, he was almost handsome. This line made me smile. And it is so true.

elliestories September 7 2006, 19:28:03 UTC

The whole baby issue does have a lot of fic potential.

I'm so happy you're enjoying my stories :)

anonymous September 7 2006, 07:06:21 UTC

--She rolled her eyes and walked away, wondering what she’d committed herself to for the next eighteen years-- LOL Hey, I'm looking forward to reading at least about the first couple of those... :-) Post chapter 2 soon! Jojo

elliestories September 7 2006, 19:30:20 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading!

dallirious September 7 2006, 07:49:11 UTC

I really enjoyed this, can't wait for more. I could really see this happening *wishes really hard*

elliestories September 7 2006, 19:31:48 UTC

I'm glad this seems plausible to you! More's coming in the not-too-distant future.

perfectvelvet September 7 2006, 23:58:11 UTC

the distressed, nearly illegible printing on his t-shirt, which proclaimed “ne travaille jamais” proudly to the world.

Ha!

Good start. Love the genuine smiles. I'll be keeping an eye out for where you go with this, but so far, it's heading in a good direction :)

elliestories September 8 2006, 00:40:09 UTC

The shirt actually exists; I saw it while thumbing through a friend's old issue of GQ, and immediately thought of House!

Glad you're liking it :)

christ_chexx_4u May 5 2007, 23:14:52 UTC

You wouldn’t have mentioned it if you didn’t want me to ask. You knew I would.

this always bothered me about the episode, as cuddy knows good and well what a hopelessly curious person house is. im glad that someone has decided to touch on it, and i really like where this is going.

elliestories May 7 2007, 03:05:30 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I hope you like the rest of the work just as much :)