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What Things Are, Part 3

Sep 15, 2006 02:04

Title: What Things Are
Author: Ellie
Rating: R (for adult themes)
Spoilers: Post-“Who’s Your Daddy?”

Previously:
Part 1
Part 2

( She woke in House’s bed as dawn was wending its way into the room, its watery light revealing her hand on his stomach and her head on his chest. )

fic, what things are, h/cuddy, house

Comments 10

crumpled_up September 15 2006, 06:53:08 UTC

Angsty. Ooo. I love it. Sometimes, I think I'm a masochist because I live for this stuff. :P The numb feeling you've got going through this entire chapter was just... amazing. I can only imagine how horrifying this actually is. Yet, it's realistic enough. Excellent, once again! You never cease to amaze me with everything you write.

elliestories September 15 2006, 17:51:44 UTC

Thanks. Cuddy definitely seems the type to deal by repressing and pretending everything's all right.

sweetbicoco September 15 2006, 08:54:37 UTC

Poor poor Cuddy. If only she was less stubborn and let House comfort her. But that's so like Cuddy

Love this

elliestories September 15 2006, 17:52:00 UTC

Thank you so much!

phineyj September 15 2006, 17:45:36 UTC

I love it; you've caught her mood so well, and yet there's still lots of snark. The lobotomy line was great - would quote but for some reason it's not letting me. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

elliestories September 15 2006, 17:53:10 UTC

Thank you!

I could definitely see House attempting to puzzle out how she's doing and distract her by pulling bigger antics than usual.

emergingangelic September 17 2006, 04:27:12 UTC

OMFG. I leave for like 2 days without an internet connection & this is what I come back to? Amazing fic? I LOVE IT! Maybe I should leave more often...lmao. This was seriously FABULOUS! I loved it & was SO, SO disappointed to see it end there. :( I want the next part, like, YESTERDAY. Got it? lmao. What would be really funny is if you already posted the next part & I just haven't gotten there yet...*crosses fingers* lol. Either way, I LOVE IT & desperately want more.

elliestories September 17 2006, 18:33:19 UTC

Thank you so much! More is in the works, I promise :)

ijemanja September 18 2006, 05:21:31 UTC

Just caught up with this little series - I especially appreciate how adult it is (as in grown up/mature, not as in porny). And it is sad but not in a gratuitous, over-the-top-angst-fest way. Enjoying it, and looking forward to more, thanks.

elliestories September 18 2006, 19:44:28 UTC

Thank you very much. Keeping the sentiment honest while also keeping the characters in-character has been a challenge. It's so nice to hear that it's working for you as a reader.