wouldn't it be nice

[ellisaco]

Title: wouldn’t it be nice
Pairing: Harry Styles/Louis Tomlinson
Disclaimer: This is a work of complete fiction. The characters herein are based on real people, but the words and events are completely made up. They are not intended to be mistaken for fact, and no libel is intended.
Word count: 1412
Summary: “And maybe they get a little bit carried away

Comments

[las109]

ahh, this was so lovely. I love the little snapshot(s) of them just being two normal boys in love - we need more of that!! the whole scene at the garage sale was just precious and perfect, especially the hand-holding and the stolen kiss and then Louis buying Harry the necklace :) also really loved the "and it's a joke except that it isn't", in a bittersweet way. it was quite sweet in the fic but also could describe their relationship in general in real life: "larry", the bromance, etc. is a joke, except that it isn't. i could just be reading too much into that bit but I really liked it! great job!! <3

[ellisaco]

Yess, I love the idea of them just being very easy going on their days off and kind of forgetting about everything but each other. I'm just going to pretend that I wrote that line with that in mind, haha no I didn't even think of it that way, but it's kind of true :( Thank you for your lovely comment :)