The Real LJ Idol // Mini Season // Week 11. Title: Dog Tired

[ellison]

Steve squinted at himself in the mirror as his tooth brush swish-swished the plaque from his enamel. He picked up his phone. No new texts. It'd been a week since he'd heard from Michelle. He wondered how he'd managed to screw things up this time. He thought they'd been having a good time but now, he was just sitting in that phone tag limbo of

Comments

[uselesstinrelic]

Oh man, that was so cute, but also a bit discomforting! I might have expected a story about body swap with a dog to have been a bit of a novelty, but your obvious skill in storytelling let me enjoy the candy-like treat read of what a dog might think and do, as well as taking it to a much more serious and kind of real place that also managed to make some interesting comments and leave me with some thoughtful impressions. I like how it ended up and it really did perfectly encapsuled the concept of being careful what you wish for!

[ellison]

Oh thank you! What an awesome comment, I really appreciate it!! :D

[meridian_rose]

This was a great read :D

[ellison]

Thanks!

[eternal_ot]

Haha..this was FUN-tastic!Amazing take on the prompt..enjoyed it..:)

[ellison]

Yay, I'm so glad! Thanks! :D

[kathrynrose]

Hah! Be careful what you wish for.

Welcome back.

[ellison]

:D

Thanks so much!

[lrig_rorrim]

This was awesome. I particularly enjoyed Jake trying to put on pants. The ending was perfect, too. :)

[ellison]

Hehe, thank you so much, I'm happy you liked it!