110. fic: so tell me, darling (all the time).

[ellot]

so tell me, darling (all the time).
inception. eames/arthur. pg-13. 3678 words.
arthur has a little girl named charlotte.

Comments

[vlieger]

"i really can't about this here, okay? --> i think there's a word missing - 'talk,' i presume.

lol il the little addition abt arthur reminding himself to get the bunny steam-cleaned :DD

as eames strips down to his trunks and sides into the bed --> should be 'slides,' i think?

AND OH MY GOD THIS SENTENCE --> heart pounding, eames leans towards them, a thumb tracing the exposed hollow of arthur's hip and the soft skin of charlotte's knee. arthur sighs and rests his head against eames' shoulder.

*_* FOREVER, DUDE, UGH. SO GORGEOUS. because for all their banter and whatnot in other stories, that's just so lovely to see.

you know how much il this already, but man, srsly, it's so beautiful and detailed and sweet. &hearts, bb :)

[ellot]

thanks for the corrections. :D i guess that's what happens when you finish writing at four am. although i did indeed finish the fic before i fell asleep! i'm rather proud that. if you see anything else though, feel free to point it out. i think my brain just immediately glosses over it all now.

oh man, i'm so glad you like those sentences. i wrote it so many different ways, i just gave up a bit at the end and stayed with that. i also spent half an hour trying to figure out whether eames' or eames's was correct. a fruitless half hour because every reference i looked at seemed to have a different opinion about it. :P ugh, english grammar.

i'm attempting to decide whether or not to open post this fic now. are people ready to read my first actually completed fic since 2008? ahaha. wow, i just looked through my lj and i have six wips with a fair amount of words written. dude, do you remember when we tried those amélie aus

[ellot]

aw, thanks so much. your comment just is like a cup of hot cocoa to me. haha. seriously, ♥.

[photoclerk]

That comment is exactly right. I couldn't stop thinking about how I wanted to be reading this while drinking my apple green tea. <3 Fantastic and sweet in all the right ways. Not too sugary. ...I meant the story but the same goes for the tea as well I suppose.

[ellot]

aw, thank you very much. ♥ i'm glad it came across as sweet. i have to admit that i was afraid it was overly angsty at times and then overly sweet. haha. now i want some tea though.

[ellot]

it felt like it was going on forever when i wrote it. :P it was originally meant to just be around 1000 words. but i'm really glad you liked it. thanks!

[ellot]

i'm really glad you liked it. thanks. ♥ and kid fic is always nice to have.

[strzyga]

oh, this is just what i needed before bed ♥♥ so sweet and adorable and i loooooovelovelovelove arthur as a daddy *3*

[ellot]

i'm glad you liked it. ♥ tbh, i hadn't really imagined arthur as a father at all until i read that prompt and then this just exploded.

me being me, i can't write banter at all and it ended up all angsty in the beginning with eames and arthur. but amazingly, lottie was the easiest one to write. i quite enjoyed it.

[strzyga]

lol i've already read this another two or three times, haha.

just a typo i noticed:
we both we involved in that which i'm pretty sure should have a "were" somewhere in there. i swear to god there was another one but i can't find it now.

ANYWAY. just so you know, the idea of a four year old girl saying "your long is sound, daddy" just makes me wriggle with glee every time i read it. all i can think of is star trek ahaha. |D;

[ellot]

aw, i'm really happy that you liked it enough to do so. ♥

oh, thanks! i've goten to the point my mind just ignores the typos in this fic. ahaha. i think i spent too much time spent rewording things.

for some reason, i just really liked the idea of arthur and lottie watching tos together. arthur refuses to have his daughter watch dumbbed down children's tv. (and he's a trekker at heart.)