131. see the sun break through (part 2/2).

[ellot]

see the sun break through.
part one

Comments

[ellot]

♥ _______ ♥

lol, i'm so happy you liked it so much! and ugh, all the feeeeeeeeeelings. the boys were driving me crazy with all those. i'm glad they came across well. ahahaha, the porn. idek. it just kept getting longer and longer! i don't know how it happened but it's probably more than half the fic. :P

[bluefish_dory]

Best thing I've read in ever! I started this on a smart phone on a bus (not my best idea) and then had to rush home to read it in privacy it was so hot! Best thing on the internets!!!!!!

[ellot]

aww, thanks so much! i'm so happy you liked it enough to go through all that trouble. and lol, oh the porn! this is the longest, most explicit scene i've ever written. it was meant to be so much shorter but i kept having to add things in. ♥

[anatolia_limb]

the porn part is flawless. really impressive, just wow.
muito obrigada! eu tambem acho que todas as pessoas devem falar portugues.
but, but. it seems so wrong, Wardo living with Chris.
it seems Chris would better be with Dustin and Mark is all careful tentative and loving to Wardo...

[ellot]

aw, thanks! i was the most anxious about all the porn so i'm glad that you like it. okay well, i've never studied portuguese so i had to look that up and if google translate is correct then yeah, it's a gorgeous language. but alas, there was no course for it in my high school at least and i had two other languages i studied at uni. i think trying to add portuguese on top of that would've actually killed me. :P

i think wardo and chris were very loving together but since this fic was about the introduction of the ot4, i had more focus on the pairings that hadn't been together. but they're ALL together now! so it's hugs and love all around. ♥

[anatolia_limb]

what languages do you learn now?
for me, portugues is pretty easy though my native is russian and it's my first latin language... I learn it here: http://www.busuu.com/
okay, hope so) the more is the better)

[ellot]

hmm, well, i grew up speaking korean although i need to relearn a lot of it now. my grammar isn't good and i need to expand my vocabulary. i studied arabic and persian at university.

russian's a great language. :D two of my friends studied it and one is actually working in moscow now. i'll check out the site later, thanks.

[savetomorrow]

Okay, so I wasn't even going to read this at first, because the Chris/Eduardo bit freaked me out a little, but then I was like "hmm, OT4 feelings-porn, iiinteresting", and it's written by you, so yeah. I JUST HAD TO.

And then it was so hot that I almost missed my bus (I read this in the morning but I couldn't comment then). Seriously, I had all the time in the world but then I started reading this and and and it was just too good and I had to finish it and then I ended up running to the bus stop and I barely made it. And I didn't have time to eat anything and I forgot to brush my teeth! I blame you.

SO. THIS IS RIDICULOUSLY HOT. I don't even read things like this, usually, but agfghhddjkl. Give me all the cold showers in the world because oh my god, honestly.
AND THE FEEEEELINGS. ♥♥♥ Porn with feelings is the best kind of porn. Aghddhkl, you are such a great writer.

[ellot]

aw, not a chris/eduardo fan? i just fell in love with the idea of the two of them back at harvard after the dilution and actually wish there was more written. (i'm also a big fan of dustin/eduardo toooo.) but yeah, mark/eduardo will always be my otp. :D and awwwwww, thanks so much for liking my writing even enough to even try reading it!

lol, i'm so sorry. i'd send food and toothbrushes your way if i could. but ahaha, i'm glad you liked the fic enough to be so distracted by it. :P

oh god. the porn, idek! i pretty much never write it. or at least i didn't. the scenes in the timer au were the most explicit things i'd written before i blushed all through writing those and then i started this fic and just O_o. by the time it ended, the fic from when dustin and mark walked into the living room to see chris/eduardo was over 7000 words. :P I STILL DON'T KNOW HOW THAT HAPPENED!

but i'm happy the feeeeeeeeelings came through well. they were driving me a bit batty trying to figure it all out. :P and aww, srsly. thanks so much! ♥

[des_pudels_kern]

...I would have loved you for post-dilution Harvard Chris/Eduardo alone, but, *whistles* Who ever said that escalation had to be a bad thing? Oblivious!Dustin who is a bit in lust and a bit in love with all of his friends is just adorable. Chris strikes me a bit as the puppetmaster here, the only one who knows all the cards (and is a horrible tease). And the Eduardo/Mark is just... I don't even have the words. But in my mind every now and then when the OT4 shenanigans bring those two together Mark will touch Wardo tenderly and awed, with protectiveness and wonder, because he loves them all, he does, but Wardo is the one he lost, Wardo is the one he thought he'd never have and get to touch, especially not like this, and they are already on their second chance here, he won't let them mess it up again.

[ellot]

oh man, one day i really want to right post-dilution chris/eduardo but all the ideas i have are all just friendship and/or pre-ot4 which isn't a bad thing imo. ONE DAY THOUGH. aw, i'm glad you found dustin adorable. i had such a time trying to figure out how much he knew about his own feelings and everyone else's and when he figured it all out, etc. but he's a really fun pov character to write. ahaha, i feel that chris and wardo are the bit of the schemers but chris is the more assertive one. i liked the idea that chris and wardo have always been completely open with each other so that they KNOW that they love each other but they also know that they love mark and dustin as well and have done so since harvard. and yay! i'm glad you picked up on that little mark moment about not letting it fall apart again. ugh, just thanks for reading and your wonderful comment. ♥

[des_pudels_kern]

Mh, Eduardo is quite a schemer here too, I agree, but Chris is the one who is in the better position - he has been around both sides, Mark and Dustin, and Eduardo, has seen how what happened affected them, and is more suited to guess how Dustin and Mark would react to the offer of an orgy than Eduardo.

I have a weakness for protective!Mark. Of course I immediately zeroed in on that bit.