Comments | elmo_hates_me: i am a song writer!! =)

elmo_hates_me

i am a song writer!! =)

Aug 22, 2004 18:33

hey everyone, okie i wrote lyrics for two songs down, these are my own, originals =). i just want to know what you guys think of them, please give me honest opinions dont try to make me happy by saying they are good when they suck!! thanks =D here they are ( Read more... )

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xromanticmrdrx August 22 2004, 15:52:57 UTC

i dont like the first one. its too harsh. as much as it may be somewhat true there`s a nicer way to talk about girls...i have to say that one honestly made me feel sick.

the second one is good, much better than the first. some of it sounds kind of angry, but hey, thats the way it is

thanks! elmo_hates_me August 22 2004, 16:01:03 UTC

thanks for the feedback, the second song isnt angry, just... frustrated? lol but not angry for sure

Re: thanks! elmo_hates_me August 22 2004, 16:10:55 UTC

its not even frustrated, im just weird lol

Re: thanks! xromanticmrdrx August 22 2004, 17:37:13 UTC

hey everyone, okie i wrote lyrics for two songs down, these are my own, originals =).

lies! you said eddie helped you!

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yankeefann August 22 2004, 16:28:38 UTC

::applauds::

yankeefann August 22 2004, 16:31:00 UTC

woops forgot to write more. lol...uh..the 1st one could be lil bit better. the second one is a better. but good job man.

woot elmo_hates_me August 22 2004, 16:33:42 UTC

thank ya, i like the first one lol, i agree that its a tad harsh but its true

Re: woot yankeefann August 22 2004, 17:02:19 UTC

y do u like the 1st one. its too harsh n you know its true. lol. w.e man. lol

blondebabe26 August 22 2004, 17:50:49 UTC

yeah matt, the first one is harsher then it should be. most girls arent like that but w/e floats your boat. the second one tho was good.

-lee-

lost_x_lullaby August 22 2004, 19:03:54 UTC

that's what i'd say. it seems like it's making it out to be like the song is about every girl when most girls aren't. (it was funny though. just harsh.)

am_____bulance August 22 2004, 18:06:39 UTC

its already been said, but that first one, harsh to the max

the second is ok

enldogruaavrhs August 22 2004, 19:34:20 UTC

~~Summer Girls ( ... )

elmo_hates_me August 22 2004, 20:19:12 UTC

haha we can still be friends dont cry lol, i wanted criticism anyway so no worries

a_beautifulmess August 22 2004, 21:10:22 UTC

lmao!! i could totally hear you saying all that. *shakes head* i think i actually miss you, you jerk. lol <3 Jacqui <3

lost_x_lullaby August 22 2004, 21:25:11 UTC

he's got good points. my favorite was, "hi i'm matt, i'm a virgin." and the "1,2,3,4 etc etc you get the point)

but he wouldn't have to technically be on his face if the sun was on his back, would he? the sun could be shining at an angle where it's behind him, therefore shining on his back. unless i'm just stupid, which is likely.

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