SPN gen fic - Laws of Motion - John, Dean and Sam PG13

[eloise_bright]

I have fic. *dances with glee, tempered with mild exhaustion

Comments

[minim_calibre]

Oh, [insert Winchester here, repeat thrice].

[eloise_bright]

Thanks. I like it when an Oh, Dean becomes an Oh, Winchesters. *g*

[kellifer_fic]

N'aaawww... boys... Sammy is such a knucklehead sometimes...

[eloise_bright]

Thanks. They're not great at communicating really. *g*

[blucasbabe]

All 3 of them need someone to shake them a little bit and say "Open up your stupid eyes!" ...or something.

Your last line killed me, but in a good way. Loved it.

[eloise_bright]

Thanks! They do all need a shake, and maybe a hug... *grins*

[hucknclem]

Hey, you. :) Wow, I just loved this, in all its angsty, achey glory. And I loved your description of John being rough when he's worried for Sam, like he doesn't know how to be gentle. It makes me hurt in all the right ways. I'm so glad you finished it! :)

[eloise_bright]

Thanks, babe! I'm just so pleased to have finished something! I really wanted to show how John doesn't cope well with the boys being hurt. It's a dichotomy - he'd blame himself, but he still allows them to be exposed to danger on a hunt. Oh, John. (and of course, Oh, Dean and Oh, Sam)

[flynn_boyant]

Oh, oh wow!
This is just beautifully angst ridden. Such a poignant look at the Winchesters' inter-relationships and dynamics.
It's wonderful.

[eloise_bright]

Thanks! I finally rediscovered my angst muse. I liked the idea of the three very different headspaces as the story progresses.