SPN Drabbles - Seeing Red - PG13

[eloise_bright]

In an attempt to beat my muse back to life, I'm selling myself over at Sweet Charity. I'm offering one SPN fic, rated PG-R, at least 1500 words, and I'm willing to be challenged. Gen, Het, Slash, Kink. I'm open to offers. Please buy me.

Also, I wrote three interconnected drabbles. For the prompt red over at 100_ghosts. And of course that challenge has now

Comments

[ficwize]

Ouch. But what a beautifully drawn ouch.

[eloise_bright]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it *g*

[iamstealthyone]

Nicely done. You had me guessing in the first one regarding who John actually hit.

Oh, Dean.

I like how the drabbles work together to provide a sharp, hurty picture in only a few hundred words.

[eloise_bright]

Thanks. The misdirect was tricky to write - I wondered if it was a little too contrived to be convincing. Glad it worked for you.

[eloise_bright]

Thank you! I watch that scene in DMB and I can't help thinking it's a scenario they're all familiar with.

[eloise_bright]

Thanks. It was tricky to pare it down to the 100 words each time, but it worked better as a short sharp punch than as a longer fic, I think.

[daisybalance]

It's wonderful how you use Dean and his need to defend each of them, particularly from their own worse angels.

I am in awe of this and all your stories. If eloise wrote it, I know it is going to be great.

[eloise_bright]

Thanks. I don't think Dean is even aware that he's doing this, it's just second nature to him - Watch out for Sammy.

I really appreciate the feedback and the rec, thank you again!