[fic] Our Environment - Chapter Five
Ward rolled onto his side in the sun and wiggled his legs in the air, making the human-kits laugh at his antics. They had visited his and Fons’ den every day for the past fourteen and they had slowly worn down his carefully developed defences, disarming him with treats and quick, timid pats on his head. It reminded him of the time before he was ( Read more... )
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The deer back in the forest were much more dangerous and were at least edible.
Ward wrinkled a nose at the humans. They were round and white, but soft looking. He cocked his head for a better look.
The human-kits responded with “Awwwrss” and weird chatters.
Were they edible, Ward wondered.
This made me giggle madly. The humans just see a cute, fluffy "cat", and Ward's wondering if he can eat them. I'd take out the "r" in "Awwwss", and add a question mark to "were they edible".
<’Close the entry!’> Fons muttered at him and presented his back. The guilt curdled in Ward’s stomach again as he miserably clapped the entry close. Last word needs to be "closed". Fons is jealous. I'm so pleased. It never occurred to me that petting could be so threatening, but it is to wild animals, huh? Not only letting another being into your personal space, but letting them touch you near vulnerable areas is really a huge sign of trust. Great thinking, there.
A short nod from the Heiderich. <’That you do.’> Fons sighed as he ( ... )
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I really like writing all the human/animal interactions, it's so much fun. I can't wait to get back into writing it. The quicker I write/finish this story the quicker I can work on the OTHER plout!bunny!
...hehe plout. More spelling examples C:
Thanks so much~ Cheers
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