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Fic: 5 Times Annie Was Kissed In The Way She Wanted To Be (And 1 Time She Wasn't)

Apr 14, 2011 12:03

Title: 5 Times Annie Was Kissed In The Way She Wanted To Be (And 1 Time She Wasn't)
Word Count: 5798
Rating: PG-13 (for sexual suggestions?)
Pairing: Annie/OC, Annie/OC, Annie/Vaughn, Annie/Jeff, Annie/Troy

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Comments 19

sanaazzy April 15 2011, 20:42:01 UTC

Oh wow! I love this:) You write them all so well, very in tune with each character, it's like watching it onscreen. The Troy episode was really adorable, and its nice to see such character growth.

“If you say no, I promise I will never mention it again.” His eyes met hers and Annie felt her belly heat up. “But if you’ve been staying away in some misguided effort to help me, then I’m tired of waiting Jeff.” She took a deep breath. “I want you. Now.”

Jeff’s eyes darkened in the dim light of the kitchen and Annie felt exhilaration flow through her like a river. But in the next instant, he was clenching his eyes shut and physically turning his head away from her to rest his chin against his shoulder. “Annie…” he said slowly, sadly. No, no, no! Without giving him another glance, she stooped to retrieve her robe and hurried out of the kitchen.

She never mentioned it again.This scene owns so fucking much! The amount revealed in these few lines is astounding, you are officially my hero. Annie (repressed and shy) really put herself out ( ... )

elsiesnuffin April 18 2011, 18:54:37 UTC

I'm really glad you liked this. I really feel like at some point we are going to see Annie do this or something similar anyway and I wanted to get it written before they went there on the show.

Thanks for reading!

cozy_cupcake April 15 2011, 21:56:19 UTC

Ummm SO MUCH LOVE!!

elsiesnuffin April 18 2011, 18:56:14 UTC

Thanks for reading!

lunamystik April 16 2011, 14:34:01 UTC

Always love "5 times" fics, and I loved this one. Other than vignette iv, my fave was the one in the park with Troy.

elsiesnuffin April 18 2011, 18:58:33 UTC

Thank you so much for reading!

dearygirl April 16 2011, 20:08:01 UTC

This is beautiful. I can so picture young Annie being frustrated at Patrick not wanting to kiss her, and poor teenage Annie so caught up in the rush of feeling wanted. I think my favorite was strangely the little scene with Troy because there's something so sweet and innocent there and I like that the two of them have a shared past that they both struggle with in different ways.

And GUH. Annie and Jeff in the kitchen broke my heart but it was quickly mended when he asked her out and then there was awesome making out against the wall. I love that you can tell he's nervous and unsure, but in a Jeff kind of way where he's also pretending he doesn't care about anything. PERFECT.

elsiesnuffin April 18 2011, 19:02:18 UTC

This was actually going to end with Annie and Troy together, but I physically couldn't make myself do it. I guess I know for sure now that I really am a JA shipper, for better or worse. I'm so glad you liked this!

engelen April 17 2011, 18:04:11 UTC

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwn

Also, Annie's swings story remind me of my childhood... Except mor pathetic because I never had a best friend D:

Also, FUCK YEAH WONDERWALL!!!

elsiesnuffin April 18 2011, 19:05:20 UTC

Thanks for reading! I promise when we meet at a Comm-com that I will push you on the swings!

Also: Oasis- Still holds up after this long. Go crazy Gallagher bros!

engelen April 18 2011, 19:18:58 UTC

OH MY GOD

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