Fic:It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 6

May 27, 2011 09:27

Title: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 6
Spoilers: Through Season 2
Word Count: 2608
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon owns all of this.

AN: Okay.  So there were some strong reactions to the last chapter, but I hope that you understand how much shorter this whole thing would be if Jeff had quickly changed his personality and gone with ( Read more... )

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elsiesnuffin May 27 2011, 22:01:19 UTC
Wow, angry fists two chapters in a row! That is awesome. I will make things as twisty as possible for you. Thanks for reading!

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mysty_kitty May 27 2011, 15:33:21 UTC
Now first and foremost --> WOOHOO!!!

I love updates. I love the Pierce/Annie dynamic and the bitchy neighbors. I feel bad for Pierce, and am glad Annie threw Jeff under the bus (well sort of). I'm a little surprised that he gave Rich as a present...I didn't realize they got along. But good for Annie...when one hot older man refuses to come to Italy find another hot older man to play with. ;)

I will love to see if Pierce is evil enough to let Jeff know about Rich or Jeff will simply suffer a heart attack when the first photos start to surface...

Now I want you to know that I doubt garbage will be thrown but, I am happy to hold up a plastic barrier for you while you rite the next chapter if you are concerned...

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mysty_kitty May 27 2011, 19:43:53 UTC
ack!

I am happy to hold up a plastic barrier for you while you WRITE the next chapter if you are concerned...

(I am ashamed, never have I posted a review with such poor typing...)

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elsiesnuffin May 27 2011, 22:09:16 UTC
Pierce and Annie are really interesting to me. I would like to see Pierce take on a fathering role with her on the show. And I thought maybe you were being hip with the lack of 'w', the way people spell thingz with zs. I might take up that personal bodyguard offer in the future. Thank you for reading!

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nicodemusfleur May 27 2011, 16:12:27 UTC
...WHAT.

The things you do to me.

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elsiesnuffin May 27 2011, 22:10:29 UTC
Sorry? Unless it's good things, in which case- you're welcome!

Thanks for reading!

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teruel_a_witch May 27 2011, 16:26:56 UTC
UPDATE SQUEE :D

I hope you didn't think I'd flounced after last chapter or anything, I was just very busy, and I don't protest to the way you handled things at all, I actually think it was very wise and in character (and very powerful chapter), because even when Jeff was at the airport, he was doing it for all the wrong reasons, he was doing it for her (because he really just can't say no to her), not for them, which means he still doesn't get it, and since he already decided they were going to fail even before they started (Jeff/his insecurities are the new show's OTP) that's definitely not the way to jump into things, that would have been a rather messy mistake, contrary to what may seem, I don't actually want Annie to force Jeff into something he doesn't know he's ready for, he needs to actually GET IT, it won't work if he does this for misguided reasons. I can't even be really mad at him 'cause he's like a lost lamb here XD Now, onto this chapter ( ... )

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elsiesnuffin May 27 2011, 22:17:58 UTC
Ha! Okay, I love Rich to an unhealthy degree, but I am convinced he has a chest freezer full of cocktail waitresses at home. He's just got a creepy vibe to him. It's that last shot from 'Beginner's Pottery' with the crazy eyes. They've never explained it either! Is he Norman Bates?

Unfortunately, I have decided that since the show has forgotten that he's a hot issues, I probably should too. That means Rich in this fic is going to be non-axe-wielding.

Jeff really doesn't get it at all. He deserves to be sitting in Colorado thinking about Rich & Annie. Thank you for reading!

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teruel_a_witch May 28 2011, 13:39:57 UTC
He's just got a creepy vibe to him.
He totally has, and I'm still convinced there's something more to him than just being annoyingly nice (yeah, I'm kinda with Jeff on that XD), plus, Jeff comparing Rich to Jeffrey Duhmer and Ted Bundy wasn't accidental XD The show doesn't forget anything, it usually resurfaces at the most unexpected moment possible and at the moment of most convenience at the same time (like Troy's awesome plumbing skills XD)

Is Norman Bates a serial killer too?

That means Rich in this fic is going to be non-axe-wielding.
Ah, ok then, I can take his hilariously annoying self and will enjoy every second of emotional torture that puts Jeff through XDD

Jeff really doesn't get it at all. He deserves to be sitting in Colorado thinking about Rich & Annie.
WORD, let him have his nightmares about Mrs. Annie Stephenson *gg*

The pleasure is mine :D

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elsiesnuffin May 28 2011, 14:07:30 UTC
Noman Bates is the character from the Hitchcock film 'Psycho'. If you've never seen it, I recommend checking it out.

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dearygirl May 27 2011, 16:40:34 UTC
HA! Well I was not expecting THAT. Oh, I can't wait to see Jeff's reaction to Rich being there. If that doesn't get him on the first plane to Italy I don't know what will.

And Annie's giddiness over being in Italy is adorable. Pretty much exactly how I'd act in that situation.

Can't wait for more!

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elsiesnuffin May 27 2011, 22:21:29 UTC
Jeff's hatred of Rich is endlessly entertaining to me for some reason. He hates him so much but it's because he wants so badly to BE him. I live seeing Jeff lose it, and Rich is a sure fire way for that to happen.

Thanks for reading!

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