Everyone was saying that they hoped he was going to see Pierce, so I'm glad you liked that it was Shirley. I love Jeff/Shirley ( the 'Gravity' montage that got made for them on YouTube was sooo good) and she's always the one who gets blamed for JA not happening.
Abed and Annie are really interesting to me because there sometimes is a sexual aspect to them, but neither really are that into it. They simulated sex in front of everyone for crying out loud. But they always just seem super comfortable with each other.
Wasn't gonna be too wordy but got inspired while writing XDteruel_a_witchJune 10 2011, 16:11:44 UTC
Wow, I can't believe it's 10 chapters already, seems like you started yesterday, I still can't get enough of this story, and I'm still as just as excited for new instalments as I was from the start (I usually gradually lose interest and drop from long-running WIPs and rarely read them in full because I have a very short attention span and stop wondering after time how it ends but you grabbed my attention at the collar and wouldn't let go of it, so I'm not even on a starting stage of withdrawal and I'm pretty sure I'll stick around), and once again your new chapter turns out to be my post-exam treat, it's like you subconsciously time them ;D
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Re: Wasn't gonna be too wordy but got inspired while writing XDelsiesnuffinJune 10 2011, 23:27:12 UTC
First and foremost- RED! I love Red! Is there anything better than the ep where they have the garage sale and Hyde bakes pot brownies and then the adults eat them? 'Hip. Hip. Hip. I can see my
Re: Wasn't gonna be too wordy but got inspired while writing XDelsiesnuffinJune 10 2011, 23:33:18 UTC
First and foremost- RED! I love Red! Is there anything better than the ep where they have the garage sale and Hyde bakes pot brownies and then the adults eat them? 'Hip. Hip. Hip. I can see my own mouth!'
Secondly, I hope you're still interested. It does seem like it's going fast. But that is kind of the point. It's a diversion from ACTUAL JA in the fall. If I've figured correctly, this should wrap up about 2 weeks before the season premiere.
Yeah, Jeff even manages to be a selfish prick when he's being noble. Poor guy. There were quite a few seeds dropped in this that will come up later, but not much of any consequence in this particular chapter, so I'm glad you liked it!
Re: Wasn't gonna be too wordy but got inspired while writing XDteruel_a_witchJune 11 2011, 00:00:24 UTC
Haha, Red is so entertaining "When my time comes I want to be buried face down so that anybody who doesn't like me can kiss my ass" *gg* And that was a hilarious episode.
Of course, I'm still interested, I just said so, didn't I? To be honest I like slow pacing much better than quicksand writing action when I can barely keep up with what's happening (I really don't read fanfic for the plot, I read it for character stuff and shippy stuff, and laughs when proper), I like to dwell on things and observations and feelings and details and I love subtlety and the way you find so many ways to express something without actually spelling it out loud, ultimate show not tell, your writing is so layered and I enjoy peeling all of the layers while getting to the meaning (you can't take a propensity to analyse text even for pleasure out of a linguist, I need to get my kicks somewhere *gg*) So yeah, no complaints from me (except I wish I had a billion dollars so I'd pay you quit your day job and write fanfic for a living *gg*)
I'm actually one of those people who like Rich and he seems to be the perfect guy for Annie but let's face it, he's no Jeff Winger ! It was great that you included Abed in this chapter, I love his character, too bad he hung up on Annie before he told her about Jeff !
I love how everything is progressing, you're not rushing things and it's admirable because I think that right now Jeff and Annie are definitely not ready to be in a relationship ! I have to admit that I love some angsty and you're doing a great job balancing all the characters' emotions and thoughts !
I always thought that the journey was more interesting than the destination but I know that at the end you're going to make the destination as good as the journey, and I can't wait to read it !!! Thanks for sharing ♥♥♥
Yeah, this is definitely about the journey. In reality ( which is still a tv show, but whatever) they would have some things to work through anyway, so I am actually going to make them break a light sweat.
I really do like Rich. I think together, Annie and Rich would look like a J Crew ad, a little too perfect. But to me, he really is like Ned Flanders, like the reason he irritates people is because he's better than the rest of us. And also possibly a serial killer.
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Sorry you didn't get one of my smart-assTM comments... I'll have one for the next chapter, I guess...
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Abed and Annie are really interesting to me because there sometimes is a sexual aspect to them, but neither really are that into it. They simulated sex in front of everyone for crying out loud. But they always just seem super comfortable with each other.
Thank you for reading!
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Secondly, I hope you're still interested. It does seem like it's going fast. But that is kind of the point. It's a diversion from ACTUAL JA in the fall. If I've figured correctly, this should wrap up about 2 weeks before the season premiere.
Yeah, Jeff even manages to be a selfish prick when he's being noble. Poor guy. There were quite a few seeds dropped in this that will come up later, but not much of any consequence in this particular chapter, so I'm glad you liked it!
Thank you so much for being so damn supportive!
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Of course, I'm still interested, I just said so, didn't I? To be honest I like slow pacing much better than quicksand writing action when I can barely keep up with what's happening (I really don't read fanfic for the plot, I read it for character stuff and shippy stuff, and laughs when proper), I like to dwell on things and observations and feelings and details and I love subtlety and the way you find so many ways to express something without actually spelling it out loud, ultimate show not tell, your writing is so layered and I enjoy peeling all of the layers while getting to the meaning (you can't take a propensity to analyse text even for pleasure out of a linguist, I need to get my kicks somewhere *gg*) So yeah, no complaints from me (except I wish I had a billion dollars so I'd pay you quit your day job and write fanfic for a living *gg*)
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I love how everything is progressing, you're not rushing things and it's admirable because I think that right now Jeff and Annie are definitely not ready to be in a relationship !
I have to admit that I love some angsty and you're doing a great job balancing all the characters' emotions and thoughts !
I always thought that the journey was more interesting than the destination but I know that at the end you're going to make the destination as good as the journey, and I can't wait to read it !!!
Thanks for sharing ♥♥♥
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I really do like Rich. I think together, Annie and Rich would look like a J Crew ad, a little too perfect. But to me, he really is like Ned Flanders, like the reason he irritates people is because he's better than the rest of us. And also possibly a serial killer.
Thank you for reading!
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Thank you so much for continuing to read this.
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