Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 11

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: It’s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 11
Spoilers: Through Season 2
Word Count: 1929
Rating: R (for Jeff’s dirty mouth-er, brain)
Disclaimer: Dan Hamon owns all of it.

AN: Thank you to everyone who has been reading this. It really does mean a lot to me. I’m glad people seem to be invested in this story and that it can work to get us all

Comments

[ext_462401]

What? The fuck? Did he just say?

Had me on the ground laughing. Seriously. You write all the characters so well!

I should let you know that I am addicted to your story. Every chapter update I am so giddy with excitment to see what you have planned. This story is so superb and I wish I would comment on every chapter because that is what you deserve - however I'm lazy and after reading everyone's comments I feel like there is nothing more to be said. So good luck and I hope to comment more.

OH OH and your a/n I agree! All the new fic is amazing; right now if you miss a day of checking there is a whole new page waiting for you!

[elsiesnuffin]

Solution to not wanting to reiterate- be 1st to comment! Awesome! I'm so glad you have liked this so far! it's turned into quite a labor of love for me, so I get really psyched to hear people are enjoying it.

Thank you so much for reading AND commenting!

[chrissy624]

After the last chapter, I was eagerly awaiting Jeff's reaction to Rich being in Italy with Annie, and you definitely did not dissapoint with this chapter. Your characterization of Jeff is absolutely perfect. You write his conversations with the other members of the study group, and his inner dialogue so well, that I really feel like I could be watching an episode while I read this story.

I'm really loving the direction that you're taking this story in, and I can't wait to see what is up next for Annie in Italy.

[elsiesnuffin]

Jeff is nuts. And he still doesn't even get why. Writing these characters interacting with each other is so much fun. I'm glad you're entertained by this!

Thanks for reading!

[fangirl_101]

Yes! I love when Jeff goes crazy mad and starts kicking things (Debate trash can = HOT!) It's so like Abed to not say anything about Rich being in Italy knowing the longer Jeff didn't know the bigger the reaction would be. Really great chapter. I love Whitman, so it's awesome to see him in fic.

[elsiesnuffin]

Whitman thinks he's so deep and philosophical, I just couldn't resist throwing him in here. Angry!Jeff is hot, but I love all incarnations, even SelfishJag!Jeff. So I'm not a good yard stick probably.

Thanks for reading!

[sowritesauds]

Another great chapter! I love Abed's phone personality. And I am excited to see what Jeff is going to do once he figures out he made the wrong decision, and needs to fix it.

[elsiesnuffin]

Abed is such a great character to write because you can totally short hand things that you might otherwise have to go to lengths to explain. He isn't judging people, he just calls things like he sees them. Jeff is a conundrum of a human being, isn't he? I didn't realize until I had to climb into his brain. Dude has got issues.

I'm glad youve liked this so far! Thank you for reading!

[antinickname]

Damn you for keeping me roped in with suspense 11 chapters into this! I love the Jeff/Abed interaction here--it's so exactly how I would imagine it happening. Wonderfully done. I am looking forward to the rest!

[elsiesnuffin]

I am so sorry that I have such an amazing talent for writing compelling cliffhangers*. Jeff and Abed are really fun to write and I'm happy to hear it rang true for you. Thanks for reading!

*Denotes extreme amounts of sarcasm. Like really extreme.