Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 21

Jul 28, 2011 21:22


Title: It’s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 21
Spoilers: Through S2
Word Count: 6529
Rating: R
Disclaimer: They belong to Dan Harmon. Whatever he chooses to actually do with them is his business I guess.

AN: So...everyone have a good week?  I don't even remember where we are with this thing and I'm writing it.  Oh, wait.  We’ve finally arrived at ( Read more... )

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thegrin July 29 2011, 18:27:35 UTC
I love that Jeff is still jealous when Sergio and Rich are near Annie, I also love the fact that she's one of the few people who can make him nervous!
I still don't get what's going on with Camilla but I'm sure we will know soon enough! I'm curious to see how Annie is going to react in the morning with Jeff in her bed but I thought it was sweet of Jeff to stay with her!

He’d kept her at exactly arm’s length because while he knew he shouldn’t have her, couldn’t want her, he never wanted anyone else to have a chance.
This line is my fave because seriously it's so true, I have nothing else to add except that this chapter was amazing! Thank you for sharing ♥

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 03:45:01 UTC
Jeff is so easily rattled when it comes to Annie and he still doesn't really get why that would be. It's kind of endearing really.

Camilla is definitely involved in some shit here, but you might not really find out for a few chapters yet. Wouldn't it be awful if I skipped ahead two days and didn't let you see Annie's reaction to Jeff in her bed? That might be a little mean I guess.

Thank you so much for continuing to read!

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stephanierb July 29 2011, 18:49:13 UTC
What a fantastic chapter to come home to ( ... )

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 03:51:37 UTC
If LJ hadn't been such a messed up bitch this week, you would have had two chapters. That was my goal was to have two chapters for you. How was your vacation dear ( ... )

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stephanierb July 30 2011, 12:42:45 UTC

For me? I feel so special! :-)

Yeah, I saw that LJ had been down for a few days. Another DDoS attack. What a drag.

I had a very nice vacation, thanks! Or I still am, I guess. I go back to work on Monday. But I'm home now, just chilling out.

Do I think he would have actually been able to go through with it as they got closer to the act? No, but in his head he was trying to rationalize sleeping with her because he wanted to.

I wondered if that might be the case after I posted, but then Annie took care of that for him. :-)

And I tend to agree that Jeff being all precious and wonderful is a bit OOC. And Annie wasn't so drunk that I wasn't horrified or anything, just surprised since he was on her about drinking too much. I guess that in the moment, his horniness overpowered his protectiveness. ;-)

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 14:10:06 UTC
I seriously was going to post this on Monday morning and post the next chapter today. I had to rewrite my entire posting schedule (which I do have because I'm nerdy). So my original plan was to be done by the 6th so I could really focus my attention on the DVDs, but I think it's going to be closer to the 13th now.

I think Jeff's horniness would probably trump any other feelings he ever had for anyone. He was sleeping with Britta for a year and he can barely stand her half the time.

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engelen July 29 2011, 20:21:47 UTC
There's this commercial here that airs all the time. I can't remember if it's Visa or Mastercard, but it's about this couple having a holiday in Italy. Everytime I watch it, I think about your fic :P

So, YAY!!! Sexy times!! YAY!!! :D
I'm glad you didn't describe him getting hard, and her panties getting wet. THANK YOU. As an inexperienced virgen, do men really get hard in under 30 seconds? That seems very inconvenient... but yeah... I don't know...

ANYWAY. JEFF, WHAT A HARD JOB IT IS TO UNDRESS AND GET INTO BED WITH HER. YES. YOU COULD HAVE JUST SAT ON A CHAIR NEXT TO HER AND WAIT THERE. BUT NO, YOU'RE REALLY SACRIFYING YOUR WELL-BEING FOR ANNIE'S SAKE!!

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 04:07:16 UTC
Aw, that is so awesome. I am pretty much at the point where anything Joel-related is reminding me of that wading pool recreation you made for Troy and Jeff last week. Thanks for that.

Wow, and that wasn't even really that sexy of sexy times! In general, I think I'm going to try to be vague on the smutiness in this story (because there definitely will be smutiness), but I don't know how carried away I will actually get.

I'm not a guy, so I can't say this for sure but I think erections are a pretty quick process most of the time. And it ends up being pretty convenient ;

All Jeff nudity in this story is merely done for your capslock approval. No joke. Thanks for reading!

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engelen July 30 2011, 04:39:19 UTC
LOLOLOLOL
GOD!! I still need to draw them in that Gillian and Alison photoshoot...

Hahaha, hey, they've been on "Antartic" for the past... 20 chapters. Kissing and nipple-rubbing counts as sexy, I guess :P

Haha, my CAP-TYPING-ENTHUCIAST-SELF FEELS SPECIAL!! ♥ ♥ ♥

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cozy_cupcake July 29 2011, 23:38:32 UTC
Jeff stared at his reflection critically. It was scary how good he looked.

Always love Jeff's ego. He knows he looks good and that's what makes him so deadly.

“That’s because I’m really good-looking, Annie.“

“Bellisima,” Sergio agreed as he too moved toward her and then embraced her warmly. Oh. Much better.

HAHA

Everyone in Italy was crazy.

True story.

The rest...I died a little. Hot, sweet, sexy. So much love! This is one of my favorite chapters. I cannot wait to read Jeff's reaction to Sergio/Rich!

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 04:10:29 UTC
Jeff's ego is fantastic. He's so sure of himself sometimes. Or most of the time.

I'm so glad you liked the chapter so much. Thank you for reading!

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fangirl_101 July 29 2011, 23:53:38 UTC
I kind of had a tiny revelation. Camilla is like Dean Pelton in that she's always eying up Jeff and grossly checking him out and he's not interested in it at all. It's like he can't escape creepy people drooling all over him. Too much sexy for one man I guess. (but I do find the Dean adorable in his creepiness; Camilla is just repulsive)

Anyway, another amazing chapter. Can't wait for the next one!!!

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 04:11:38 UTC
Oh my gosh, she is like the dean! He really is the one character on the show that everyone is a little bit in love with. Poor Jeff.

Thanks so much for reading!

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