Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 24

Aug 14, 2011 18:47


Title: It’s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 24
Spoilers: Through S2
Word Count: 3394
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine.

AN: So this chapter starts what I would call the third and final act of this story.  There's not much here though.  More of a bridge chapter than anything.  It can't all be morning sex and angry fights though.   I can't tell you ( Read more... )

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stephanierb August 15 2011, 02:46:59 UTC

Stage Three Prostate Cancer? That's not good. I wonder if Pierce is freaking out and that's why he asked for Annie.

And poor Annie. Jeff really was harsh and that had to have just gutted her. I can't imagine what the flight from Rome was like.

I can't believe Rich got caught off just as he was about to tell Annie what Camilla had been up to! It must be a whopper, because I can't imagine you would torture us over an insignificant detail.

Wait, would you? lol

And what was Jeff about to say? Was it something other than his almost, sorta apology? (And really, he needs to actually say the word sorry if he wants people to believe he's sincere.)

I loved how Abed immediately assumed that Jeff was on edge because of a fight with Annie. And I can't wait until Abed's movie is finished. I have this picture in my mind of the whole group watching, and Annie and Jeff's reactions in particular, and I'm cracking up already.

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stephanierb August 15 2011, 14:19:28 UTC

Ugh, Rich got *cut* off. This is what I get for leaving feedback when I can barely keep my eyes open.

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elsiesnuffin August 16 2011, 04:06:22 UTC
I knew exactly what you meant. And I appreciate that you wrote when you were asleep.

Jeff and Annie are not in such a good place right now. I think Jeff technically knows that he needs to fix it, but isn't sure how. And Rich had some important information for Annie, but she can't finish a phone conversation apparently.

Thank you so much for reading. I can't help but notice that there was no dirty joke here. Don't let that happen again.

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petrichor_fizz August 15 2011, 02:59:30 UTC

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moony88 August 15 2011, 04:05:17 UTC
What Petrichor_fizz said seems to sum it all up.

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elsiesnuffin August 16 2011, 04:07:24 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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shopgirl909 August 15 2011, 07:20:45 UTC
THIS THIS THIS THIS THIS THIS THIS

Sums up the Jeff/Annie situation, the Pierce situation AND the sneaky creepy Camilla situation.

Looking forward to more.

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midtega August 15 2011, 04:28:28 UTC
Well that was unexpected, I certainly did not expect annie & jeff to still speak one another after the last chapter. Albeit the conversations are now ripe with tension, but still after reading the end of this chapter they still right where they always end up. Both of the unable to truly and I mean truly say what this I'm metaphorically pointing to the jeff and annie relationship means. HInt: U care about each other idiots. Sorry I meant to save my minute by minute reaction last. Anyway highly intrigued what rich wanted to say to annie. And can I say that you have managed to make me forgive rich after interrupting sexy times of jeff and annie now that rich is no longer doing the nasty with sergio. So good job with that ( ... )

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wallows August 15 2011, 12:20:54 UTC
Poor Pierce! You really captured the tension between a couple who had just had an argument and are "not speaking", or at least Annie trying very hard not to speak to Jeff. There is something about this interaction that is very couple-y of them. And underneath the mild sniping and the push and pull, I thought it was kinda cute. And I wonder what juicy tidbit Rich has on the conniving Camilla...

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elsiesnuffin August 16 2011, 04:12:11 UTC
I kind of enjoy that now everyone is on Pierce's side again. Cancer is the ultimate sympathy vote getter. Jeff and Annie are acting pretty couple-y without even realizing it.

Secret about Camilla you say? Hmmmm.....

Thank you for reading!

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fangirl_101 August 15 2011, 14:00:55 UTC
Guh so good! What is going on though? What was Rich going to tell Annie? How is Sergio involved? I NEED ANSWERS!!!

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elsiesnuffin August 16 2011, 04:15:06 UTC
I don't like to answer questions. I just like creating them. Haven't you been paying attention? ;)

Thanks for reading.

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