Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 29

Sep 16, 2011 09:14


Title: It’s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 29
Spoilers: Through Season 2
Word Count: 7653
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon owns everything here. Except the word ‘squander’. I don‘t know who owns that.

AN: Okay guys. Holy cow. So, in May when I started this, I had every intention of it being completed before the new season started. Actually ( Read more... )

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petrichor_fizz September 16 2011, 22:22:39 UTC
Seriously, Jeff, stop being such a tease!

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elsiesnuffin September 22 2011, 13:32:29 UTC
If it makes you feel better, I think his will is going to give out on him soon.

Thanks for reading!

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petrichor_fizz September 22 2011, 17:45:18 UTC
Hooray! Hope your computer issues aren't too debilitating, by the way.

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leigh198910 September 16 2011, 22:55:47 UTC
Yay sexy times! I loved this chapter, it was so sweet and perfect. I don't really know what else to say. Just well done!

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elsiesnuffin September 22 2011, 16:47:05 UTC
Yay for sex! There really can't be too much smut with these two.

Thanks for reading!

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chrissy624 September 17 2011, 02:56:02 UTC
THIS is why I love your stories so much, because there's always a great emotional pay off at the end. This chapter was so amazing. I loved the way you had Jeff slowly open up to Annie, and that he realized that it wasn't all that hard to do. I'm really glad that Annie asked about the Britta thing. I'm sure it did hurt her to find that out, and I'm glad that she made sure he knew that. I loved that you got into Jeff's insecurities in this chapter, because I really think that they are a driving force behind a lot of his decisions, especially regarding Annie.

I cannot wait to read the last two chapters of this story. This story has really helped me get my Community and Jeff/Annie fix during the long hiatus.

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elsiesnuffin September 22 2011, 17:54:38 UTC
This entire story, people have been pointing out to me how dramatic it is and I decided that I wanted something quiet and honest and private for the climax. I think it threw some people honestly, so I'm glad you really enjoyed it.

I hopefully will be back in business soonish and will have the last two chapters posted.

Happy season premiere day, by the way! And thank you for reading.

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ext_462401 September 17 2011, 05:50:32 UTC
This story has gotten me through the Community break and the only thing that would make me not depressed once the final chapter comes is the fact that the actual show is back.
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THEY LOVE EACH OTHER!
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I love your current music and it kinda suits the chapter.

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elsiesnuffin September 22 2011, 17:58:06 UTC
You have officially made it through the long hiatus! Congrats!

I was listening to that Buble song on repeat the entire time I was writing this chapter, so I decided to use it as the song. I hope that even though the show is back, you will still read the rest of this.

Thanks for reading!

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crazyqa215 September 17 2011, 15:07:35 UTC
So. I'm pretty impressed with myself. I read 29 chapters in three days!! And on my phone! Haha. But now to compliment you, this is amazing! Sorry I didn't comment chapter to chapter, but I'm commenting now. :D

This story is seriously amazing. All of your voices are SPOT ON! I think you may secretly be a writer on the show or something... No, but really. Great work. Looking forward to the last two chapters. :)

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elsiesnuffin September 24 2011, 01:54:36 UTC
I wish I was a writer on the show, but I'm afraid I'm not :(. I find it extremely impressive that you read the whole thing on your phone. That takes dedication!

Thanks for reading!

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