Club 31

Feb 20, 2009 18:54



This is a birthday fic for tacuma811. As usual, I'm very late. I just managed to write a paragraph or two in a day, which is the reason of my lateness.
Anyway, Belated Happy Birthday Ann! (Btw I always thought that we're still in the year of 2008 ^^;)

Title: Club 31
Pairing: Perfect Pair
Genre: General
Rating: PG (nothing except some drinking scenes)
Word Count: ( Read more... )

perfect pair, fanfics, prince of tennis, one-shot

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Comments 15

mitsu_syusuke February 20 2009, 15:11:00 UTC
heh~ i didn't know that Tezuka means 31..thank you for letting me know!
'Cactus Jack', the name is cute, must be Fuji who name it! XD I like this fic very much! thanks for sharing! ^^

ivy

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elysis February 24 2009, 08:11:46 UTC
Yes, Tezuka means 31. Although the reason may sounds a bit silly ^^;. I'm considering should I write a side story to explain this.
Actually, Cactus Jack does exist. If you have enough luck, you'll probably find it in bars someday :).

Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm very glad you liked it :D.

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lovefujitez February 20 2009, 17:38:26 UTC
This is so cool! Now I know, I didn't know that Tezuka's name meant 31 and of course, Fuji would be the one to use it...everything is Tezuka to him, just as everything of Tezuka is Fuji!

Such a heartwarming fic, had giggles while reading this gift fic.

Thank you for sharing, Ann-chan will be very happy!

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elysis February 24 2009, 08:18:24 UTC
You're right. Nothing matters when it's Tezuka to Fuji and vice versa :).

Thank you very much! Your comment mean a lot to me. And now I have more courage to keep writing. Thanks again :D!

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tacuma811 February 20 2009, 20:55:43 UTC
Wow, just wow! That was so beautiful! It almost made me cry!
Glittering drops of heaven's rain were slowly descending from the bright blue sky, making two shinning paths all the way down to earth
I loved that part, so very, very good! I'm just speachless, don't know what to say ^_^"
I love that you used Saeki! I love Saeki toooooo! XD
Tezuka does look like he is 31. XD No, he looks like 34 XD But I didn't know Tezuka means 31.
I wanna try Cactus Jack XD XD If even Tezuka likes it, I might like it too!

Thank you very, very much Elysis for your wonderful fic! I really love it!!

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elysis February 24 2009, 08:34:23 UTC
It almost made you cry? Well...I didn't mean to...but I'm glad that you could feel the emotion nonetheless ^^.

I used Saeki on purpose, since I know you love Saeki and we were talking about Saeki in that time :).
I know he looks old, but that's not what I meant xD. And why must be 34 btw?
You may find the info (such as abv and ingredients) of Cactus Jack here. As you can see, I didn't just imagining things xD.

Thank you very much Ann-chan! Your comment is very important to me. And the fact you liked it is the best reward for me :D.

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tacuma811 February 24 2009, 16:38:30 UTC
Yeah, beautiful things make me wanna cry sometimes. You did a good job on the emotions!!

Yes, Saeki = <3 <3 <3
We've been talking about almost all PoT charactes, ne? XD XD
I don't know why 34. I once talked to someone about Tezuka and we agreed that he looks like 34, so that's why 34 XD No real reason XD
I don't really drink alcohol, but that sounds good!! Blue Curacao is good. Lemon- and pineapplejuice too! I'm not a fan of orangejuice, but it's not bad! ^___^ I wish I could try it!

You're welcome! You did a really good job! I really loved it ^___^

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elysis February 25 2009, 03:45:18 UTC
I'm glad to know that. Honestly I felt like writing more about the atmosphere of the bar instead of the emotion itself. So I'm very happy that you could still feel it!

I always think Saeki could be a good friend to everyone, that's the other reason for using him of all people ^^.
No, I think we just keep talking about Chinen Hiroshi xD.
I've never had Curacao itself, but I've once tried it with latte, and it tasted quite good :). I love pineapple juice too! I guess you can try it, since its abv is only 12.2%.

I feel really relieved that you liked it, that's the most important :D.

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paranoid_fridge February 22 2009, 16:19:46 UTC
That is one wonderful, wonderful fic. You should write more ^^

The way you described the atmosphere was fantastic - I especially like how you designed the club, contrasted Tezuka with the rest of the crowd and fitted Saeki into the picture. And the ending was pure, utter love!

A question of interest - does 'Cactus Jack' exist? It does sound yummy ^_~

Thank you very, very much for sharing!

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elysis February 24 2009, 09:39:49 UTC
Thanks! I haven't write for a long time as I know I still have a lot to learn (not that I've learnt that much now ^^;). Writing is still a very difficult task for me ^^;.

Honestly, the designed of the bar was simply based on my own taste. Though I guess it did suited Fuji quite well ^^;. And the armchair is a virtual thing from a game which I love playing very much, you can have a look here if interested ^^;.

Yes, Cactus Jack does exist. HERE is the info of it. Maybe you'll find it in bars someday :).

Anyway, thank you very much for reading and commenting again!

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a1y_puff February 24 2009, 04:04:09 UTC
That was wonderful, dear! I like your style in descriptions. For the story itself, you did really well! It was somehow refreshing and sweet to read <3
You really, really should write more! Great job, dear. *hugs*

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elysis February 24 2009, 09:44:51 UTC
Thanks very much! I'm glad that you didn't think it too boring and tedious ^^;.
With your encouraging comment, I'll probably be able to write more in the future. Thanks again *hugs back* :)!

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