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elysis

Getting Into 306

Apr 24, 2009 15:54

This is a birthday fic for a1y_puff. This time, I'm even later than the last few times, blame my lack of writing skills. And well, games can be very distracting as well. Especially that two games name "Pet Society" and "Restaurant City" on facebook. Btw, is there anyone here playing these games too? I would love to add those who're playing, namely ( Read more... )

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tacuma811 April 24 2009, 13:18:35 UTC

Wow, that was really beautiful! I loved it!
The atmosphere is so dreamy and beautiful. Almost like a fantasy story. I love that Fuji is a painter. I think it's really Fuji-like. When painting you can let your mind drift off and live in your own dream world. Exactly like Fuji is doing in your story. I should start painting again as well. But it i is such an expensive hobby.
I love it that Tezuka's dream is almost the same as the painting. It shows that Tez and Fuji think the same things.

Sorry if I made mistakes in this comment. There is a spider in my room and I'm not letting him out of my eyesight, so I type without looking (luckily I can type blind).

elysis April 29 2009, 06:39:56 UTC

I'm glad you liked it :)
You know I always love vague things, and dreamy things could be very vague too.
For me, Fuji is the artistic kind of boy. Of course everyone knows he likes taking pictures, but there're too many fics about Fuji being a photographer (and a very successful one as well). Thay's why I wanted to come up with something more different, an unknown painter in the beginning. Yes, paintings and all those equipment could be very expensive. (That's another reason why this dreamy Fuji. Besides of his personality, the lack of money could only take him to nowhere.)

I couldn't see any mistakes in your comment. I guess you can be very brave too xD? I hope the spider had leave you alone afterwards.

And finally, thanks very much for your comment :D

tacuma811 April 29 2009, 11:27:42 UTC

Yes, I know you love vague things and dreamy is vague, but beautiful!
I think Fuji is an artist indeed, but for me it's easier to see him as a photographer than as a painter, because I think he makes photos because he wants to make memories ^__^ But I love the idea of Fuji being a painter. It's Fuji-lik ^_^
Painting equipment is expensive indeed O_o

Great, I didn't make mistakes, while I was keeping an eye on the spider XD The spider is gone now! Yay!

You're welcome ^______^

mitsu_syusuke April 25 2009, 07:40:12 UTC

aww.. this is so beautiful..
i like the bubble metaphor, and Fuji's painting. there're a lot of hidden meaning behind all these things.. and Fuji moved to Tezuka's place! it makes me all warm inside!
love this fic very very much! ^^

elysis April 29 2009, 06:42:50 UTC

Thank you so much :)
You're right. Everything Fuji does have double meaning, kind of like his personality.
And Fuji moving to Tezuka's place. It wasn't a mere coincidence (we're talking about Fuji after all ^^;).
Again, thanks very much for your lovely comment!

ice_flow April 25 2009, 09:56:42 UTC

Aww..how sweet!!! Lol, it'd be interesting to see Tezuka's co-workers when they find out that that artist they've been admiring so much is with Tezuka...XD sequel, ne? ^_^

elysis April 29 2009, 06:52:21 UTC

Yes, it'd be very interesting indeed. Guess Tezuka will make his colleagues run laps for attempt at stealing his Fuji away xD.
I'm sorry but I don't think it will have any kind of sequel...this is just the exact ending that I wanted ^^;. But anyway, thanks very much for your lovely comment! It made my day :D

ice_flow April 25 2009, 10:12:59 UTC

Aww..how sweet!!! Lol, it'd be interesting to see Tezuka's co-workers when they find out that that artist they've been admiring so much is with Tezuka...XD sequel, ne? ^_^

paranoid_fridge April 26 2009, 21:24:36 UTC

Awesome story, I really enjoyed reading!
The details were wonderful, like the colour of Tezuka's shirt, how the weather mirrored the events and how you described the picture Fuji was painting. Made the scenes very vivid and easy to picture, and created a wonderful atmosphere.

And... the reunion at the end was simply the best. ^_______^
Thank you for sharing!

elysis April 29 2009, 06:55:55 UTC

Glad to know you enjoyed it :)
I always enjoy writing the surroundings more than what's on the characters' mind. And I'm very happy to know that it could bring out the right atmosphere ^^.

Thanks very much for reading and commenting :D