23:00

[elysis]

This fic is dedicated to paranoid_fridge , tacuma811 , lovefujitez , sasuke_fuji  and a1y_puff ; whose birthday had long since passed, and whose birthday is around the corner. Especially for Mona-chan, because I've promised a fic for her more than 2 months ago. And now, I'm finally done...

And Ai-chan, thank you so much for being my beta reader. :)

Title: 23:00
Pairing: Tezuka/Fuji
Genre: General

Comments

[kat_himesama]

wow, that was very cute and romantic!! I love the stalker!Tezuka..not to mention he was a cop... ^^

and poor Saeki, receiving a fist from Tezuka. That must've hurt!!

Thank you for sharing!!

♥

[elysis]

I'm pleasantly surprised that you think it was romantic, maybe because of that broken lamppost? I was afraid that the fic would turn out boring and all. So I'm really happy to hear that you think it was cute and romantic :)

I hope Saeki would forgive me, he's one of my favourite actually. But I couldn't think of any candidate which would be more suitable than him.

Thank you for reading, and the lovely comment too :D

[kat_himesama]

I really thought it was romantic..since it was Tezuka doing the stalking..it's like the things you do out of the ordinary because you're in love..ahahaha..cheesy!!!*smacks myself*

I think he would, don't worry...he is really a nice guy after all.. ^^

and I hope to read more from you!!

♥

[tacuma811]

Omg, Tezuka is stalking Fuji! <3 That was priceless! I loved it. I love that Fuji starts chuckling. He completely understands the situation. He and Tezuka really don't need words. They understood before anything was said XD Totally awesome Ely-chan. Glad to read one of your fics again! Your writing style is still awesome!

[elysis]

Thank you so much Ann-chan! I'm glad to know that you had a good time reading it. Luckily I didn't lose my style, haven't write anything for a very long time, really ^^;

Of course, they should "know" each other before they "know" each other (you know what I mean, no? Lol). That's why Fuji started chuckling. Tezuka should have known, shouldn't he? Lol

[tacuma811]

Yes, always happy to read fics of your hand! You should write more! ^__^

Lol, yes Tez should have known XD

[mitsu_syusuke]

Stalker!Tezuka!!!!!!!!!! he's so cute!!!
this story is kinda dreamy amd everything flow smoothly and nicely! me like this, but I feel sorry for Saeki though..XD

btw, i like your new layout! ^^

[elysis]

Thank you! I love making my fics dreamy, and I'm happy to know that you could feel it too :)
I feel sorry for Saeki as well, he's one of my favorite in POT. But for the sake of Fuji's happiness, I guess he didn't mind. xD

And thanks again! I had a little hard time on making this layout, glad that it turned out quite nicely :D

[paranoid_fridge]

Wai, thank you so much!

That was awesome! The entire piece had a wonderfully intense atmosphere. At times you had me wondering if Tezuka was a vampire or something else "otherwordly". ^^

Fuji, too, was amazingly well done. I really liked how he must have known about Tezuka and employed Saeki's help to get Tezuka to reveal himself ^^ (poor Saeki though.)

Thank you very much! That was exactly what I needed to read!

[elysis]

I was glad that I could make it finally! At first I was worried that I couldn't even make it before my own birthday...Lol

I love making the readers guess, and think on their own. That's why I love dreamy atmosphere, and intended to not revealing too much in the beginning. At some point I was afraid that I revealed too little and the readers would feel confused and bored. So I was glad that it turned out not too bad in the end. :)

Fuji looked innocent when actually he was not. That's where the set up comes from. Because he could feel that murderous-aura in Naniwa No Oujisama, he should have known he was being followed as well. xD (I feel sorry for Saeki, looks like he always end up bad in most of the TeFu fics (if he would ever show up) Lol)

My pleasure Mona-chan :D I'm glad to know you enjoyed reading it. And thank you for the lovely comment!

[a1y_puff]

As I said before, what I like the most in this fic is the atmosphere you created. Dreamy and whispery and serene, if that made sense xD;
I think you have a unique style and way with words. You should write more! :D

As for the story itself, I like cop!stalker!Tezuka xD
It was ironic and yet sweet since he only wanted to 'protect' Fuji :)
Saeki showing up as a way of Fuji to get Tezuka to come out was nice as well. Of course, Fuji would *know* if he's being followed xD

All in all, nice fic, Ely-chan! Write more! :D

[elysis]

Thank you so much Ai-chan :D I hope that dreamy touch wouldn't be too much, becauseI would like to make my fics even dreamier in the future, if I capable of. xD
I think I still have a big problem with my comma-freak-syndrome. I don't like to make complete sentences. xD Probably because I kinda feel that could make a dreamier atmosphere.

Btw, the "Fuji would know if he's being followed" scene kinda makes me think about that one scene in Naniwa No Oujisama, which he blocked his teammates from entering their room, and said something about murderous aura. Maybe Fuji could become a detective one day. xD

At last, I should thank you again, for giving me opinions and being my beta-reader. Thank you very much Ai-chan. :D