Comments | em1983: How Could There Be No Reprucussions 2/?

em1983

How Could There Be No Reprucussions 2/?

Feb 19, 2011 17:23

She breaks up with Professor Laurent. And she’s so embarrassed by the reason that she doesn’t mention it the group for a few weeks (not that the group was particularly talkative lately - ever since the blow up between her and Jeff, they’d both stubbornly returned to the group, refusing to be pushed out, and the studying went on in a stilted, ( Read more... )

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shopgirl909 February 20 2011, 02:44:05 UTC

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN. This is so good. Like good the 1000th power. I cannot wait to read more....so please write more soon. Like now. HEHE. :) Seriously though, wonderful story.

em1983 February 20 2011, 06:23:19 UTC

I'm pondering where to go next- probably the funeral,combined with the groups reaction to Jeff/Annie (or Jeff/Annie in secret and the group finding out but not telling them they found out; I always thought that would be awesome)

shopgirl909 February 20 2011, 07:34:30 UTC

I LOVE secret Jeff/Annie, but I trust you to do the writing...so....have you started writing yet? :P

carefree83 February 20 2011, 05:31:04 UTC

Oh my gosh, so many wondrous things to comment on but it's 5.30am and I am absolutely incoherent so I will say this.

This? Brilliant and I cannot wait to see how this pans out.

em1983 February 20 2011, 06:23:50 UTC

Thanks so much!!! Though I have to say, you must be REALLY tired if you think this is brilliant! lol

shan21non February 21 2011, 13:18:31 UTC

I just read both parts and WOW. I love it and you have me on the edge of my seat, desperate to know what happens next. Please continue it ASAP!

The tension between Jeff and Annie is amazing, but I also love that you've made this an ensemble piece. Everyone else is so in character (with my personal fav being Troy trying and failing to hug Jeff!). Just really, really good. WRITE MORE SOON!

khan81 February 21 2011, 23:07:43 UTC

"It means I'm going to have you."

Um...that line totally made me melt into a puddle of goo! Still am loving the emotional depth. Off to read chapter 3!

fangirl_101 February 23 2011, 19:06:52 UTC

Holy Hell Jeff's last line. OMG! Seriously, that was like a slack-jawed, mouth agape, eyes bugged out reaction right there. On to part 3 and can't get there fast enough!