Fic: You Know That She'll Break You In Two

Mar 28, 2010 19:11

Title: You Know That She'll Break You In Two
Characters: Cook/Effy
Rating: M (for language)
Words: 1408
Summary: You just don’t care what you look like, the world is falling around you.Disclaimer: Not my characters ( Read more... )

cook thinks about sex, fanfiction, effy is mysterious

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em_sh March 28 2010, 18:47:02 UTC
I know, right? I've been messing about with this for a few days and then I was listening to that today and just went, oh, there it is. So you know, thank you for that.

Cheers dude, I don't intend on it ♥

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triptohere March 28 2010, 19:41:11 UTC
In general, I'm not reading post S4 fic about these two, as anything in which they are not hopelessly broken wouldn't make ring true. And, in that case, why depress myself?

You are an exception to the rule, of course. This was heartbreaking to read, and I mean that in the nicest possible way. They deserved better than what canon gave them, so thanks for writing this like you actually care about the characters.

(still bitter)

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em_sh March 28 2010, 19:53:37 UTC
I know what you mean, anything that wants to ring true to canon has to, by definition, be horribly depressing and yeah, hopefully this is, even though I wish it didn't have to be.

(Also still bitter)

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mammary_glands March 29 2010, 18:39:42 UTC
This is the most realistic post S4 fic written about Cook and Effy. This feels like something that would actually happen to them.

As much as I love Katie/Cook, these two are my 'OTP' of gen 2, so I really love this. There's not enough CE fic floating around, and seeing this on my flist (written by you) nearly gave me a heart attack.

It's all so well written, really. You never cease to amaze me with your understanding of each character you write, especially Cook who I would imagine is a tough Cookie to get right. I don't get how you absolutely get every single one, but you do. Inspiring. :P

This was beautiful and, maybe it's pushing it, but I really hope you get around to writing more about these two.

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em_sh March 29 2010, 19:09:07 UTC
Thanks mate, I really wanted to do something a few years down the line, where the feelings aren't quite as raw, but are just as real, so I'm really pleased that it comes across as plausible.

Ha, funnily enough I don't find Cook too difficult - out of these two it's Effy by a mile that's harder for me. But that's a really lovely compliment, thanks :)

Lol, not pushing it at all. I dunno if I'll write more of them, I definitely wouldn't rule it out, but yeah, it'd be awfully depressing unless it went AU, and well, I dunno really! Need an idea first!

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dazzleme89 March 29 2010, 22:14:35 UTC
Holy fook. Crying right now. I could see this happening, very Ceffy. Why can't you write the movie script?! It would be amazing to see this on screen.

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em_sh March 29 2010, 22:18:25 UTC
Aw, I'm sorry for your tears! I wouldn't worry too much, I think we're in good hands with Jack Thorne. Thanks for taking the time :)

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em_sh March 30 2010, 18:34:36 UTC
Thanks very much, I'm glad you liked it!

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