"for a couple of days" should probably go before "the week of the 19th"...at least that's how I'd do it...that's my only guess. :) Good luck with everything.
I am always humbled when others find grammatical and stylistic anomalies in my writing - particularly in a case like this, when I don't even realize I've done it. Although that's not what I was thinking the problem was, I think that's a pretty deserving guess. (Although I'm sure you can make better cookies than I can, anyway.)
If no one else figures it out by next weekend, I'll be sure to let you know. (And don't worry about missing it, it's more logistical than grammatical and quite easy to miss.) :)
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I must not be all that good of an editor, as I've missed the mark you set. *is curious now*
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2. What Dan said.
3. You don't use torrents, you torrent files.
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However, I'm surprised that you didn't stop and think about how many brothers I actually have...
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