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emalinourie

Fanfiction Otalia: Finally together (1/1)

Jul 26, 2009 18:39

Title: Finally Together (1/1)
Author: emalinourie
Pairing: Otalia
Rating: T (PG-13)
Disclaimer: Not mine
Summary: Sequel to Finally Alone. Olivia and Natalia are at the spa resort, falling asleep on Olivia’s bed after watching a movie. The next morning, Olivia wakes up with Natalia in her arms. What happened?
Author's Note: Fulfilling once ( Read more... )

natalia, chrystal chappell, otalia, olivia, fanfic, jessica leccia

Comments 14

jay00789 July 26 2009, 18:06:38 UTC

Amazing. I love it. Simply love it.

emalinourie July 26 2009, 18:48:00 UTC

Thank you! (and I simply love your avatar! reminds me of DiNovia's great Otalia story ;))

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emalinourie July 27 2009, 20:32:35 UTC

Thank you! This is how I imagined their first kiss... That is, before they messed up the s/l... ;)

ndasky1 July 26 2009, 20:35:43 UTC

This was just beautiful and so perfect for Nat and Liv. Loved both parts of the story.

emalinourie July 27 2009, 20:32:59 UTC

Thank you very much :)

perpetualblyss July 26 2009, 22:45:24 UTC

Really lovely.

emalinourie July 27 2009, 20:33:29 UTC

Thanks :)

bluejace July 26 2009, 23:45:16 UTC

I hadn't read the original so now I am caught up. Beautiful, really love all the descriptions of the feelings and your kiss is really the best first Otalia kiss I've read in fanfic.

emalinourie July 27 2009, 20:34:07 UTC

Why, thank you so much! That means a lot to me :)