[The Used, emobreakup!bert/quinn]

May 30, 2004 08:46

[Emobreakup!bertandquinn, my crappy icon thankyouverymuch, but hey it inspired a story! A story after so long! Low rating and stuffs, and duh, Bert/Quinn, The Used. Go read :) P.s - tell me if it makes sense!]

Experience had taught you to expect yelling, screaming, fists pounding pathetically on your chest; it wouldn’t hurt because he didn’t have ( Read more... )

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anchoredboyy May 30 2004, 13:06:53 UTC
aww. that was great. Bert against the wall, that part was cool, because you can see that, and it's something different than head in hands, crying, you know? and the note, so sweet. you're good, dude.

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kali_exorin May 28 2005, 12:33:54 UTC

I'm unbelievabley moved by this -
almost to tears (but i blame that on being an overly-emotion person)

and I want to thank you -
because it's hard and it's rare to find any Used slash -
and even rarer to find it with such an intense emotion, that's relatable.
and even harder to find well-written fiction.

i love the way Bert dealt with that, with his hands on the wall and his face hid-away.
it sounds like Bert to me, and that's important. i can see him doing this.

and i love the way you write about him writing notes, and how the ink spots are important - and that Quinn knows that that's special.

...and how his heart broke in such a visable way. but it didn't reduce him to tears.

thank you ♥

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emothy June 7 2005, 11:04:31 UTC
I'm sorry I haven't had the chance to reply to this; I haven't had the internet for a few weeks, but I'd just like to say that was a lovely comment and thank you so much for it! It made me smile :) I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!

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