[fic] More KHR fic, because after all this time I still love Yamamocchan the best XD

Mar 31, 2009 06:06

Title: Relationship of Thieves
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4,128
Pairing: 69+80, 80+69 mainly. D80, S80, and 8018 can all be seen as platonic. You don't have to squint to hard to see the other pairings though.
Genre: Drama
Disclaimer: No Voiiiiiii or anything of the like belongs to me.
Summary: Yamamoto has something about him that draws people in. ( Read more... )

my fic, katekyo hitman reborn!

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minutie April 25 2009, 10:01:51 UTC
“I know, the only reason you like udon is because socks aren’t the only things you wear.”

A-ahahahaha. XD;;

That was a great read! I like Yamamoto's interactions with the other guardians. It was... nice. Haha, idk. Good job though! :)

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ember_alda April 25 2009, 10:07:05 UTC
XD Thanks. I love Yamamoto to death so I watned to see him interact with other people besides Tsuna and Gokudera so I'm glad that you enjoyed that ^_^

And yay for funny dreams!

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nonoji April 25 2009, 16:49:53 UTC
Surreal. I loved the whole dreamy atmosphere of this piece and the ending. Will be stalking your journal~

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ember_alda April 25 2009, 21:06:21 UTC
I'm glad you likes it, although to warn you I don't write as often as I should lol. But I am on a KHR kick ^_^

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azartti April 25 2009, 20:58:39 UTC
For starters I just love you for writing 6980 8DDDDDD. Second, I loved the whole dream scenario and how Yamamoto interacts with each person. All in all ♥

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ember_alda April 25 2009, 21:07:33 UTC
Yes! more 6980 love <333 I really wish I could come up with more scenarios between them >_

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xnoriko_sakumax April 28 2009, 01:59:12 UTC
asdasdsdasdsdfgdfg ♥

I love you. ;w;b

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ember_alda April 28 2009, 05:28:59 UTC
Hahaha spreading the 6980 looooovvve!

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downjune April 29 2009, 12:49:37 UTC
I liked this! I love exploring and writing dreams - and Yamamoto's were funny! I think you got his character just fine. My one complaint would be that it was sometimes difficult to tell whose perspective you were writing from. This could be because Mukuro is impossible for me to characterize, so I don't have a sense of his voice. Or it could have been a pesky pronoun issue. I have those a lot, lol. Anyway, an interesting take on these two - not too many fics around for them!:)

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ember_alda April 29 2009, 23:31:23 UTC
I always have troubles with pronouns cause it's so friggin repetative to go "yama this, yama that" and "mukuro this, murkuro that", but I can't use titles like "mist guardian" or something without it sounding awkward to me T~T It's an issure I have in every fic. SO yeah I end up relying on him/his/he which is confusing XD

I love reading dream fics, because you can really delve into any aspect of the character unhindered then, and I think you get a good feel for who they really are XD I'm glad you enjoyed it! I wish there were more 6980 fics cause I really like thinking about their dynamic.

I'm glad you liked it ^_^

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azartti August 11 2009, 08:11:56 UTC
Sorry to butt in, but I was re-reading the fic and you really should read xnoriko_sakumax they are amazing.

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