Wow. They were as fantastic as the last week's if not more.
Flipside of the Moon was fascinating in a really disturbing way. Or disturbing in a really fascinating way. It read like a well-written crime-horror short story. I love it even if you don't seem to.
Jugular Ploy was HOT. Squalo as a vampire and Yamamoto as a vampire hunter! And their lines and interactions were so IC, despite AU! Do you mind if I do a fan-doodle based on it in the not-so-near future?Succeed the Reaper almost made me cry. Teaching Yamamoto one final lesson with his own death is exactly what Squalo would do... although I hope this will not happen (sob). And the way in which Yamamoto remembers Squalo... The whole thing was really touching and SO likely to happen
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Gah! I would love it if you did a doodle, no need to ask at all.
I did enjoy writing Flipside, it's just that the characterization was so infecting it was hard to stop thinking about them that way.
I'm glad Jugular came off as still being them because vampire cliches... can get cheezy really fast XD
I wasn't sure how Succeed the Reaper was going to go since it like...focused on Yama and an original character, but it was my fic-baby. I wanted to include more reality with it, like people getting old, and how it's actually possible for someone to die in Reborn even though obviously in the manga it's not like that.
Roudabout was really a half effort from me >_< I thought the end was too abrupt but I'm glad it didn't seem that way.
Anyhow, thanks again for the fantastic review! I don't think I've ever gotten one this long before lol.
'Succeed the Reaper' is lovely ♥ And oh goodness, XI is just....aosifjselse SO MUCH LOVE LOL
sometimes when the brat is talking to him like they’re close, for a brief moment, he believes it.
Aaaah *lovesloves*
It just never occurred to him that maybe Squalo felt a bit of that same disappointment over the effect of his videos the same way Yamamoto had felt about his letters.
*flails* I. I. I just-- this is beautiful. Especially Squalo going AAAAA SECURITY BREACH AND HOW THE HELL DOES HE KNOW THIS SHIT ANYWAY. ♥ And 'Succeed the Reaper' feels so very real it's heartbreaking. (But somehow I think Yamamoto is fairly happy despite everything.)
I think you've just turned Squalo into my favourite character. :D Thank you.
Do you mind if I stalk friend you? BECAUSE YOU ARE AWESOME. *flails some more*
I'm glad Squalo's amazingness is getting around! I like to think that Squalo thinks he's super cool but deep inside he's a normal person scared of Yamamoto's weirdness :D
My absolute favorite is 'Succeed the Reaper'. My heart broke when Yamamoto was with the shark. I almost cried. I really loved how human it was. It's a manga, so you don't think about things like getting old and dying because of it. You made it so realistic and heartbreaking.
I really tried to make it realistic. That one was the one I spent the most time one, I'm glad you picked it out. I ended up writing it because I wanted to write a 40-50 year old Yamamoto and what he'd be like.
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Flipside of the Moon was fascinating in a really disturbing way. Or disturbing in a really fascinating way. It read like a well-written crime-horror short story. I love it even if you don't seem to.
Jugular Ploy was HOT. Squalo as a vampire and Yamamoto as a vampire hunter! And their lines and interactions were so IC, despite AU! Do you mind if I do a fan-doodle based on it in the not-so-near future?Succeed the Reaper almost made me cry. Teaching Yamamoto one final lesson with his own death is exactly what Squalo would do... although I hope this will not happen (sob). And the way in which Yamamoto remembers Squalo... The whole thing was really touching and SO likely to happen ( ... )
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I did enjoy writing Flipside, it's just that the characterization was so infecting it was hard to stop thinking about them that way.
I'm glad Jugular came off as still being them because vampire cliches... can get cheezy really fast XD
I wasn't sure how Succeed the Reaper was going to go since it like...focused on Yama and an original character, but it was my fic-baby. I wanted to include more reality with it, like people getting old, and how it's actually possible for someone to die in Reborn even though obviously in the manga it's not like that.
Roudabout was really a half effort from me >_< I thought the end was too abrupt but I'm glad it didn't seem that way.
Anyhow, thanks again for the fantastic review! I don't think I've ever gotten one this long before lol.
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sometimes when the brat is talking to him like they’re close, for a brief moment, he believes it.
Aaaah *lovesloves*
It just never occurred to him that maybe Squalo felt a bit of that same disappointment over the effect of his videos the same way Yamamoto had felt about his letters.
This is absolutely brimmihttp://ember-alda.livejournal.com/48070.html?mode=replyng with small delightful details like this that reduce me to incoherent fangirling asifjie
OKAY SO THAT STORY IS NOW MY PERSONAL HEAD-CANON FOR WHAT HAPPENS AFTER THE TYL ARC ♥
And Eye Candy, ah I'm so glad that had something of a resoluation ^___^
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I think you've just turned Squalo into my favourite character. :D Thank you.
Do you mind if I stalk friend you? BECAUSE YOU ARE AWESOME. *flails some more*
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I'm glad Squalo's amazingness is getting around! I like to think that Squalo thinks he's super cool but deep inside he's a normal person scared of Yamamoto's weirdness :D
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very good...
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My absolute favorite is 'Succeed the Reaper'. My heart broke when Yamamoto was with the shark. I almost cried. I really loved how human it was. It's a manga, so you don't think about things like getting old and dying because of it. You made it so realistic and heartbreaking.
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