Comments | emerald_dawn: Gone [Fullmetal Alchemist][PG-13/R][Ed/Al, Al/OFC]

emerald_dawn

Apr 27, 2009 02:48

Gone
PG-13/R
Fullmetal Alchemist
Ed/Al, Al/OFC
When you sleep you are perfect, the half-moon of your dark lashes just kissing your rounded cheek.
WARNINGS: Incest, angst

( The first time you kiss me is four months after I get your body back. )

Comments 3

erratus60 February 29 2012, 00:45:14 UTC

Heartbreaking. Makes me want to go off and write some fluff. I think I read this before somewhere, but really nicely done.

sexkitten426 February 29 2012, 06:29:49 UTC

I love reading angst. Ed could've had his happy ending if he hadn't sabotaged it. Poor naive Al!

kirathaune April 20 2012, 01:28:19 UTC

Aaagh, Ed, you idiot!

Good work on the POV. Thanks for sharing!