Camping with Gibbs 11/?

Feb 13, 2014 15:30

Dawn was just beginning to break as Gibbs moved out at a brisk jog. He heard Fornell's call for assistance and turned in what he hoped was the right direction as he lifted his wrist to his mouth. "McGee, one suspect captured, I'm moving in to help Fornell, give me a location. McGee? Tim? Damn it, McGee, can you read me?"

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honor_reid February 14 2014, 02:50:09 UTC
Great chapter very exciting! You write action very well.

Thank you!

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emerald_green37 February 14 2014, 04:23:17 UTC
Thanks! I spend hours planning out the actions scenes. I've even been known to draw out maps to keep track of things. Echoes of Goodbye and Cape Fear both had maps at one point or another.

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