I was very excited that there is more to this story!
It's great that the team is on the case but it must be hard for them to have work trying to find one of their own. Especially having to watch that video.
Not sure how I missed installment number two. If snything, this new chapter is even stronger than the first. Love the character portrayals and the job you've done in getting across the reactions of each person to Tim's disappearance. You're truly as much a master of the short story as you are the grand adventure.
Thank you. That's the goal of these shorter pieces. Big impact, not so many words. I've written almost 8700 words so far this year, mostly the short stories for this series, plus a few other things.
Well then, mission accomplished. You know I love it when you have great big word counts, and here it is only one week into 2016! I will happily devour anything you post.
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It's great that the team is on the case but it must be hard for them to have work trying to find one of their own. Especially having to watch that video.
Very nicely done. Can't wait for more. Thanks!
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