7s_prompts; Hero

Aug 03, 2009 20:19

[A/N: Follows the rest of the stories archived here. Characters used with permission.]

Many Gentle Voices
"Blessed indeed is the man who hears many gentle voices call him father." - Lydia M. Child
Ollie's in the middle of... well, Carol... when he gets the call from Diana. )

with: cissie, entry: fiction, with: carol

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cisskabob August 4 2009, 00:53:20 UTC
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Wait, I have to get coherent!! But I have glee!! I love this so, so much.

It's PERFECT. Everything from the first sentence to Ollie resenting that he didn't get called sooner to everyone's reactions when he shows up--and how awesome is Ollie for showing up? Seriously--and the talk with Cissie. <33333

Ollie sighs and makes a mental note never to have a kid with Bonnie again. ::snort:: AWESOME. I love that Cissie is kind of defensive at first, and then the whole conversation just makes me smiiiiiiiiiile.

Also, I love how Ollie plays with names and you can almost tell what he's thinking by what name he uses. Almost. It's awesome.

And they held hands and she called him Dad and I'm just gonna be bouncing happily over here for a little while.

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emerald_ollie August 4 2009, 00:55:59 UTC
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Ollie appreciates the many annoying nicknames that are possible with Bart.

Bounce away! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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cisskabob August 4 2009, 00:57:34 UTC
Cissie is exasperated by the nicknames.

...But kind of fondly. (Shhh.)

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emerald_ollie August 4 2009, 00:58:41 UTC
Haha. Don't tell Ollie. He'll never stop.

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ihavettk August 4 2009, 02:02:50 UTC
This was great! :D

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emerald_ollie August 4 2009, 02:04:07 UTC
Thanks! Cissiemun asked, so I delivered. ;)

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marvelnotagirl August 10 2009, 02:53:34 UTC
<3!! Good dad!Ollie is love!! With cherries!!

But I had to log in as Carol because "Wonder Woman?/Wonder Woman" made me snort :D

All of it is excellent.

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emerald_ollie August 10 2009, 02:58:04 UTC
Hehehe, glad you like it. They're a lot of fun to write, even in small little bursts like that. They have fun with each other, which is really great to work with.

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