fic: glowing embers

[emeraldeyes06]

Title: Glowing Embers
Author: emeraldeyes06 
Pairing: House/Cuddy
Prompt: Slap then kiss by hateistoodark 
Rating: NC-17
Author's Note: I'd like to invite you to step back in time with me... 'Let's do the time-warp again!!!' lol Okay, we're going back to the heady days of Season 3, back to one of my personal fave eppies ever,'Insensitive'. :) :) I loved it for a lot of reasons,

Comments

[akemi16]

wow, this is awesome! I really like the way you got cuddy to slap house, from the prompt I was a little iffy to how you would handle it, but you did so beautifully :)

one thing thats bugging me though....
"dry-swallowing his last six pills before laying down on the rug, propping himself up on one elbow as he leaned over her."

six of them.... I'm not completely sure at what dosage vicodin becomes dangerous, but six of them sounds almost suicidal honestly....

[emeraldeyes06]

Thank you very much for your comment. :) :)

And I take your point about the Vicodin. I was more focused on the action of filling the prompt than the specifics of the pills. We have seen him popping them like Tic Tacs, but you're right, six is a reach. My apologies, I'll change it right away.

Thank you for the concrit. Glad you liked it. :)

[aud_woman_in]

Whew! :wipes brow: Between the fireplace and the smuttin' it's getting warm in here ;)