Disenchanted XI 3/3

Jun 19, 2011 12:26


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Naruto looked up from the Hokage's desk in surprise. A whirlwind flashed before him─ so fast, it made his head spin. Before the figures even solidified, Naruto swallowed the lump in his throat, instantly recognizing the chakra signatures. The hair on the back of his neck were erect. No, Naruto thought as his stomach began churning. No, he ( Read more... )

fic, naruto-verse, sasunaru, disenchanted

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mija711 June 19 2011, 22:25:45 UTC
OMG! OMG! What! I am totally blindsided here, I leave for a little bit and come back to find all these totally awesome chapters and I am like omg omg omg reading them and salivating, and Sai is Chinatsu's papa? Ok I should of seen that coming but for some reason I didn't, I don't know why, so Naruto can still have babies as in its not a one time thingy?? omg seriously I almost choked on my soda when I read that, and Danzo being Sais daddy that was genious, hes an evil man but I can so see it, and omg hes cruel, his own granbaby, evil evil man...and oh god I dont even know where to begin with Sasuke he is sooo evil! Really did he really have to have Naruto marry him? Alerior motive there Sasu chan? But seriously would Naruto have really have lost Shun to Sasuke, and I feel sorry for Sai, ya he is loosing his family and Naruto was wrong for that, cause Sai was planted there but he loved Naru right? And he loves his daughter too right and he loves Shun and omg what will his children think of Naruto when they find out Naruto left Sai to ( ... )

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emeraldlies August 28 2011, 22:04:15 UTC
FUCK YOU LJ FOR SCREWING OVER MY DUCKIE!!! ;___;

Thankyouthankyouthankyouuuu for reading & reviewing!
I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts! ♥

You're super!

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choseninstinct January 15 2012, 10:19:44 UTC
okay...I will read this better next. But I am to excited! I know it might be odd, but i think sasuke has every right to go all mean and "we're getting married". But poor Sai. Although, what was up with his father...?

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choseninstinct January 15 2012, 10:26:49 UTC
Poor SAI! Naruto sucks! No not Naruto, Tsunade! If she hadn't ordered this stuff none of it would have happened. I think Naruto would have told Sasuke...Poor Sai. Everyone having their children stolen from them all in one chapter!

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