Fic: "Until My Dying Breath", Chapter Seven: Part One -- Kurt/Blaine Vampire AU.

[emilianadarling]

Thank you so much for still reading, everyone!! \o/ I'm terribly sorry to the people whose comments I haven't responded to yet -- I've been very busy with Uni, and have been prioritizing my fandom time into getting this written and posted as soon as possible. Rest assured, I will respond to all of them!

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[emilianadarling]

Haha, that's a very interesting soundtrack to have stuck in your head for this particular chapter! Perhaps this song would be the most appropriate? ;)

Thank you so very, very much my love! I'm so glad that you found this chapter hot, and that you enjoy my writing. Thank you a million for reading!

[amordemealma]

It's late, and I'm planning on getting up early for black Friday shopping, but whatever. I really, really want to read this now, so I'm going to. I hope I'm awake enough to give a cohesive review. :P

Oh man, I kinda hate for this to be my first comment, but... holding him more securely as squeezes his eyes shut and coils up into himself...Is there supposed to be a he between as and squeezes? Sorry, I'm done beta-ing now I swear! *ducks head in shame*

While I'm hear though I love this opening. The slow drift to consciousness, the fact that he's sleeping against Kurt and Kurt is just holding him...Does Kurt even go to sleep that night or does he just hold him contentedly, watching him sleep from time to time, drinking him all in, trying to believe it's all real, that He finally has Blaine in his arms and soon they'll be together forever? not going to lie, I actually kind of like that idea. I am wondering why Kurt felt the need to knock Blaine out. Like was he afraid that Blaine would go back on his word and not follow him willingly or

[amordemealma]

It isn't that he's safe here, with Kurt holding him to his chest like some kind of living doll. It's that Blaine is so very, very far away from safe that it doesn't matter anymore. Exactly this. Wow. I love how you stated that. Blaine has no need to steer away from certain things in order to keep Kurt from getting angry, because before keeping Kurt's anger at bay was a matter of survival. He's not going to survive now, not in human form anyways, so there's no need to worry. Because either way, his life as a human is going to be over

[amordemealma]

I was wondering if Blaine's version of Kurt would match up with reality, and I'm kind of glad it doesn't. Having it be so different from Blaine's imagination really brings to the forefront how distorted Blaine's perception of Kurt is. Kurt's room the way it is makes him more...human and tangible, less monster I think, where as before, in Blaine's dream, with the red silk sheets and the romanticized setting, it made Kurt more of...a sexual being, elevated to something else. Not that Kurt isn't that, Blaine (and all of us readers) have kind of put Kurt in this box... that Kurt is nothing more than a vampire who only cares about blood and killing and sex, and... I don't think that's true. Kurt was Human once, and even if he doesn't feel things as a human, he still has all of his human memories, and every once in awhile we see a human side to Kurt still. He still maybe feels regret over some things, like his father. He feels affection and possibly love towards Blaine. It's mostly lust, but I don't think Kurt would be so concerned with

[amordemealma]

Oh my goodness, I'm on my forth comment box and I'm barely half way done with part one! I seriously need to figure out how to reign in the crazy when I write these I think

Add being convinced that he was about to be turned only to have that one bit of certainty ripped out from under him
Slight confusion here, and I need clarification please. Is turned supposed to be killed, like he was convinced of that all the way along only to find out otherwise, or are you talking about the more short term were he thought that Kurt would turn him right away without all the foreplay? oh my God Foreplay. There is so many connotations to that I can't even. Foreplay to sex and the transformation and now my head is exploding. Excuse me.

Kurt's tenderness after asking if Blaine's head hurt, and that little kiss to make it better, oh my Lord. What are you doing to me? It's so hard to keep the fact that Kurt is a vampire and a monster into perspective when he does things like that. No wonder Blaine's been struggling with that fact.

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[chazzamba]

Holy sweet fuck, how can you just WRITE like this? This is fast becoming my favorite fic of yours, and that is really saying something. This is heartbreaking and tender and hot and terrifying and glorious and delicious and how are you this good? Just HOW? Also - I am not ashamed to say that with each passing section, I yearn more and more intensely for Blaine to become a vampire.

[emilianadarling]

Haha, oh my gosh, thank you so much, lovely!! <3 I'm so happy that you're enjoying this one so much!! Your favourite, oh my goodness. <3

Also - I am not ashamed to say that with each passing section, I yearn more and more intensely for Blaine to become a vampire. <-- Heeeee.

[museismine]

i couldn't find this at first!! but im very(VERY) stubborn, especially when it comes to your writing darling :D but i found it! yay!! i loveloveloveloveLOVE this sooooooo much <3 *runs headlong to part 2* :P <3

[emilianadarling]

Haha, I'm not sure how it got lost? It's all on my LJ, but I'm so happy you found it in the end! Thank you for being determined, and I'm so glad you're enjoying this!

[museismine]

I'm not ashamed to admit that I ship Waaay too many fics, add THAT to my internet being down for like a month, it was hard to find among the 145 message updates I had!! 0_0 but I found it (yay)