The Greater Good (Kirk/McCoy NC-17) 1/6

[emiliglia]

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[sangueuk]

At last - I’m getting to read this!

“I'm not taco salad, am I?” Leonard asks suddenly, and he feels like he's going insane. Poor Bones. And I don’t know why, but this line just made me go all gooey: “Bones is fine,” he ends up saying, which results in Jim giving him this look that seems to say, See? I know you better than you know yourself.

But you broke my heart, and Leonard’s, oh god…*rushes to next part*

[emiliglia]

He kinda needed it, though, don't you think? A little shove in the right direction. :)

[caitri]

OMG LOVE this so far. Love that Bones went to Tulane for med school and that they have fried chicken and biscuits and gravy at 5 am and JESUS CHRIST JIM WHAT DID YOU JUST DOOOOOOOOOO?

[emiliglia]

It's Atlanta, of course that's what you'd have when you have the munchies from having lots of sex all day. XD

[secretsolitaire]

Oooh, I remember that beginning! So excited to see that you continued this, even though I see you're shredding Bones's heart along the way. :-P

[emiliglia]

Oh, good! I was thinking, "It's almost been 8 months, maybe no one will remember this." :P

[romanse1]

Oh no Jim didn't!!! LOL - ok, I have GOT have faith that Jim had a reason for breaking poor Bones' heart in such a cold-blooded way. Way to suck this reader right on into this story!!!

Eagerly goes on to next part...

[emiliglia]

He definitely had his reasons and thought they had good intent... Kinda did, in a way. :)

[hsavinien]

Cool start.

I noticed a typo. "Leonard plans on getting absolutely shit-faced; there are perks to your wife - ex-wife - getting the house as is commute is suddenly much shorter" I think it's supposed to be "his commute."

[emiliglia]

*edits*

Thank you!