The Greater Good (Kirk/McCoy NC-17) 5/6

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Master Post & Mix - Part 1 - Part 2 - Part 3 - Part 4

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[caitri]

“I'm not okay, Bones.”

“Me neither,” Leonard responds, quietly shutting the door behind him before going to sit next to Jim on the floor. “And as far as I can tell, no one is. Anyone who says they are is just lying.”

My HEART.

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♥

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[sangueuk]

The emotional intelligence in your writing is stunning, bb.
whenever he smiles it seems as though he's smiling because he thinks it will make him happy instead of smiling because he is.”

And Leonard's voice is spot on:Nothing usually calms him quite like horizontal mattress stitches. haha!

*doesn't want this to end*

[emiliglia]

Erika helped me so much with that, so I can't take all of the credit. But thank you. :)

[blcwriter]

I love everything you did with Pike and McCoy in this chapter, and the small changes with Jim, OH MY GOD YES. All the additions, they're PERFECT. I love it, I love it, I love it.

[emiliglia]

Yay! I didn't want to send you these because I wanted you to have SOME new stuff to see, but at the same time I was going, "Dear god, I hope it works."

[hsavinien]

"He's mouths thank you to Uhura, who's eyes are wide with worry" should be "He mouths" and "whose eyes."

[emiliglia]

Thanks!

[hsavinien]

You're quite welcome.