Comments | emily_breathes: Oh the love...

emily_breathes

Oh the love...

Dec 15, 2005 15:03

Marriage Should Be of Love, Not Sex ( Read more... )

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spunky_gizmo December 15 2005, 21:18:11 UTC

I think it sounds great!

emily_breathes December 16 2005, 02:38:28 UTC

thanks - I worked relatively hard on it... I used a bunch from my last gay marriage paper, but I fixed a TON...

tw1tch_e December 15 2005, 21:57:16 UTC

i thought it was a very good paper. you done did good.

emily_breathes December 16 2005, 02:39:03 UTC

I wish my teacher thought so... I bet I get a C-, C, or C+ on it.

vertigo_skyy December 16 2005, 13:09:05 UTC

Awesome paper. I thought you copied and pasted that out of an article from somewhere until I read the post script. Good job.

Hah! I had a non religious wedding. *dances* I'm such a rebel. haha.

emily_breathes December 17 2005, 17:43:55 UTC

HOLY REBELLION!!!!!!
SOMEBODY CONTACT AUTHORITIES!!!!!!

Haha, just kidding. Thank you though - I really hope I did well on this one - the teacher's a bit of a bitch...

snrgevo December 19 2005, 10:00:34 UTC

Great paper. What would the teacher object to other than subject matter? I've long since forgot the criteria for HS English, but other than grammatical errors, the ideas are concise and in the best possible order for a piece like this and your research seems genuine. No cited authorities of course, though you won't have to worry about that until college anyways. Don't worry, you should do well with this one.

Just peeking in!

~J