Fic: Almost

Apr 24, 2007 20:00

almost part two of three. (part one.)
frank/bob
1,611 words

do not own
whisperingtome - you never cease to amaze me.

written for 100_situations. prompt 067: confused

Almost )

my chemical romance fiction

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emilydear April 24 2007, 19:08:42 UTC
Thank you so much. I guess it had the right kind of effect on you then (even though I am sorry for making you cry!) which has got to be a good thing. Final part soon :)

Thank you again for reading.

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emilydear April 24 2007, 20:20:27 UTC
Thank you so much. I really wanted to show the friendship between Frank and Gerard as familiar and easy because that's how I imagine them. And the subtle hints, I'm glad they work!

And the dedication - all true. :)

and thanks for the other thing. fixed

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batmanboxers April 24 2007, 20:17:52 UTC
This is not good, you're an amazing writer, but you weren't supposed to do that. That's not good. I want you to fix it.

And the ticking clock reminded me of every Bright Eyes album, ever.

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emilydear April 24 2007, 20:23:51 UTC
Well you'll just have to wait and find out in a couple of days :)

I love Bright Eyes so much. A scale, a mirror, and those indifferent clocks. That's what it kinda reminds me of. The clock is indifferent to the two separate feelings they're experiencing and the times at which the two men are hearing its ticking. If that makes sense.

And, thank you.

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batmanboxers April 24 2007, 20:44:39 UTC
That's one of my favourite Bright Eyes songs. Have you heard it on Motion Sickness, his voice is so raw and beautiful. He really is a poetic genius. I cant write without listening to him in the background.

And yeah I get that the clock is indifferent, it keeps ticking no matter what.

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emilydear April 24 2007, 20:25:31 UTC
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it.

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silindro April 24 2007, 20:31:46 UTC
Oh noes! D:

I love the way you described Frank and Gerard's friendship. It's just so comfortable and reassuring, everything a real friendship should be.


The tragedy is killing me, though. You better make it okay again, I'm telling ya! Can't have Bob running around all heartbroken and confused!

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emilydear April 24 2007, 20:41:30 UTC
Exactly! I'm glad that's how you see it because that's how I see it - I always imagine Gerard and Frank to be like that around each other. Completely at ease.

You'll just have to wait and see! ♥ Thank you for reading.

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