Fic: Almost

Apr 29, 2007 20:10

almost. part three of three. (part two.)
frank/bob
2,926 words

do not own
whisperingtome - thank you is never enough.

written for 100_situations. prompt 020: love.

Almost )

my chemical romance fiction

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emilydear April 30 2007, 18:56:45 UTC
Thank you for reading :)

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hobosam April 30 2007, 00:32:43 UTC
Aaaaawww...:]

I don't think you could've ended this any better! I was sitting here, biting my nails during their little fight, wondering "Oh god..they better make up soon, or I'm gonna go CRAZY!" And then they did :} It was perfect, every word was pure GOLD.

<3 I loved it!

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emilydear April 30 2007, 18:58:19 UTC
Oh, I'm glad you liked the ending. I was worried it would be a let down. Thank you for sticking with it and reading all three parts. :)

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bohemianheathen April 30 2007, 02:09:46 UTC
great ending - very simple. and it worked so well again all the chaos and tension of the rest of the story.

loved it :)

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emilydear April 30 2007, 18:59:14 UTC
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it!

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astrocigarettes April 30 2007, 07:25:18 UTC
Hurrah! You made it come out okay.

The emotions running all throughout were very realistic. It's great that you gave Frank and Bob a happy ending without making it smarmy or sappy- just right. :D

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emilydear April 30 2007, 19:03:13 UTC
I am gald it didn't come out cheesy because that is the last thing I wanted, but I had to make it okay. :D Thank you for reading.

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alex1008 April 30 2007, 08:04:08 UTC
this was really good !

i love jealous bob.

well, not really, but you know what i mean.

this was just..

augh.

so good.

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emilydear April 30 2007, 19:04:19 UTC
Thank you very much. I enjoyed writing jealous!Bob because it isn't something I see all too often, but I was a little worried I wouldn't pull it off. I am happy you liked it :)

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